Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Two Spirit Detectives!!!!! ❯ Spirit Detectives ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: YokosAngel 
yuske and others get sent to maze castle and get attacked by the un dead for girls show up claming to be King Emma's spirit detectives.
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Romance / | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 06.06.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 537 | Status: Completed
yuske and others get sent to maze castle and get attacked by the un dead for girls show up claming to be King Emma's spirit detectives.
Anime/Manga: Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Romance / | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 06.06.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 537 | Status: Completed
Fox: hello everybody this is my first yyh fanfic
*knock**Knock*
(goes and answers door)
Sakura: Hey fox look who I brought with me **behind her are Hiei and Kurama. Hiei does not look very happy.**
Fox: you brought our favorite char. COOL!!!
Sakura: I know our other friend is supposed to stop by soon but I don’t think that she will make it before the story starts.
Fox: okay. Anyway I was fixing to say the disclaimer any one want to say it for me
Sakura: I know to people who would
Fox: okay then they can do it.
Sakura: Hiei and Kurama ya’ll are doing the disclaimer this chapter.
Kurama: Okay
Hiei: hn
Kurama and Hiei: Fox does not own YYH if she did do you think that she would make us do things in the show that we did that she did not like. She does own he Ocs though so ask before you use them. Okay.
Fox: That wasn’t so bad
Sakura: was it
F, S, Ku, H: one with the story
“talking”
‘thinking’
(autho rs note)
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++Dream++ A young girl was wandering around in a forest. She was about known more then three. She had on a black kimono. She had black hair with white highlights and blood red tips. One eye was crimson red the other was a pale ice blue. She was walking to her home on a hill when she saw a red dragon demon above her house and her house was in flames. She ran up the hill but before she could get there the dragon came and swooped her up into the air. ++
BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. An alarm went off and a young girl reached her hand over and banged it across the room. She then reluctantly got up and went to take a shower. After her shower she went back to her room and got dressed. She decided to wear a pear of her favorite hip-hugger jeans that flared out at the bottom and had icy blue flames at the bottom. She then pulled out one of her favorite camisoles and put it one. It ended right above her belly button. It had fiery red flames going around the bottom. She wore three necklaces, five bracelets, in each ear she had four earrings, and a belly button ring. She then put some chains on her jeans on one side and left the other side plain.
She was just about to leave when her cell went off. She answered it and it was one of her friends. She said that they had to meet soon to help the new spirit detective with a mission ordered by there boss but the only way to go there is by going through a portal type thingy. She also said that they were al going to meet in Spirit world.
They all meet up at spirit world and their “Boss” sends them through the portal. They arrive a little bit after two other people arrived but the SD and three other people are still having trouble fighting off the fugaki.
************************YYH Gang Pov*******************************
Yuske, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Kurama were having trouble fighting off the fugaki. Then they saw for bright lights: one was black, one was dark purple, one was dark blue, and one was burgundy. The bright light scared all the fugaki way. Then the four guys looked at were the four balls of light landed but instead they saw four beautiful girls.
The first one had long black hair with white highlights and blood red tips. One eye was crimson red and the other was a very pale icy blue. She had on a pear of jeans the flared out at the bottom and had icy blue flames around the flare. She had on a camisole that had fiery red flames around the hem that ended right above her belly button. It showed off her belly button ring. She also had on three necklaces, five bracelets, and in each ear she had four earrings. To top it of she had some chains on one side of her jeans that finished her look.
The second one had long blonde hair. She had very pale ice blue eyes. She wore almost the exact same thing except that her flames were burgundy. She also did not have any jewelry on.
The third one had long brown hair. She also had deep brown eyes. She wore the exact something as the others but her flames were dark purple. She had as much jewelry on as the first one did.
The last one had long red hair. She had stunning emerald green eyes. She had one the same thing as the others but her flames were dark blue. She had no jewelry on like the second one.
The first one speaks and says, “Which one of you is the spirit detective for Konenma and Who are you.”
“I’m Yuske and I’m the spirit detective for that toddler. Who are you” he said.
“Who are the other three and I’m Midnight.” the first one said.
“The short one over there in black is Hiei. The dude with the red hair is Kurama. And the tall one is Kuwabara. Who are the other three and why are you here?”
“The blonde headed is Athena. The Brown headed is Rikku. and the red head is shadow. We work for King Emma as his spirit detectives. We were sent her to help you on this mission.”
‘maybe she really is my twin sister, but maybe not. The only way to find out is to see her attacks.’ thought Hiei.
S: please review
Ku: she also needs characters for an upcoming tournament. If you want your character in the tournament in a review please give her the following information:
Name of character
Age
Race (wither human, demon or half demon, if they have demon blood in them please put what kind.)
Gender
Your real name (so she can thank you)
What are the weapons he/she uses
And a small bio. With what she wears and special attacks.
H: you can also create team names for the different teams just submit it to her through reviews.
F: Hope you liked this cahpter
S: rember to review and she will post the next chapter up faster.
H & K: if you don’t review we will attack you
F & S& K& H: hope you liked the story and please review!!
*knock**Knock*
(goes and answers door)
Sakura: Hey fox look who I brought with me **behind her are Hiei and Kurama. Hiei does not look very happy.**
Fox: you brought our favorite char. COOL!!!
Sakura: I know our other friend is supposed to stop by soon but I don’t think that she will make it before the story starts.
Fox: okay. Anyway I was fixing to say the disclaimer any one want to say it for me
Sakura: I know to people who would
Fox: okay then they can do it.
Sakura: Hiei and Kurama ya’ll are doing the disclaimer this chapter.
Kurama: Okay
Hiei: hn
Kurama and Hiei: Fox does not own YYH if she did do you think that she would make us do things in the show that we did that she did not like. She does own he Ocs though so ask before you use them. Okay.
Fox: That wasn’t so bad
Sakura: was it
F, S, Ku, H: one with the story
“talking”
‘thinking’
(autho rs note)
*********************************************************** *************
++Dream++ A young girl was wandering around in a forest. She was about known more then three. She had on a black kimono. She had black hair with white highlights and blood red tips. One eye was crimson red the other was a pale ice blue. She was walking to her home on a hill when she saw a red dragon demon above her house and her house was in flames. She ran up the hill but before she could get there the dragon came and swooped her up into the air. ++
BEEP. BEEP. BEEP. An alarm went off and a young girl reached her hand over and banged it across the room. She then reluctantly got up and went to take a shower. After her shower she went back to her room and got dressed. She decided to wear a pear of her favorite hip-hugger jeans that flared out at the bottom and had icy blue flames at the bottom. She then pulled out one of her favorite camisoles and put it one. It ended right above her belly button. It had fiery red flames going around the bottom. She wore three necklaces, five bracelets, in each ear she had four earrings, and a belly button ring. She then put some chains on her jeans on one side and left the other side plain.
She was just about to leave when her cell went off. She answered it and it was one of her friends. She said that they had to meet soon to help the new spirit detective with a mission ordered by there boss but the only way to go there is by going through a portal type thingy. She also said that they were al going to meet in Spirit world.
They all meet up at spirit world and their “Boss” sends them through the portal. They arrive a little bit after two other people arrived but the SD and three other people are still having trouble fighting off the fugaki.
************************YYH Gang Pov*******************************
Yuske, Kuwabara, Hiei, and Kurama were having trouble fighting off the fugaki. Then they saw for bright lights: one was black, one was dark purple, one was dark blue, and one was burgundy. The bright light scared all the fugaki way. Then the four guys looked at were the four balls of light landed but instead they saw four beautiful girls.
The first one had long black hair with white highlights and blood red tips. One eye was crimson red and the other was a very pale icy blue. She had on a pear of jeans the flared out at the bottom and had icy blue flames around the flare. She had on a camisole that had fiery red flames around the hem that ended right above her belly button. It showed off her belly button ring. She also had on three necklaces, five bracelets, and in each ear she had four earrings. To top it of she had some chains on one side of her jeans that finished her look.
The second one had long blonde hair. She had very pale ice blue eyes. She wore almost the exact same thing except that her flames were burgundy. She also did not have any jewelry on.
The third one had long brown hair. She also had deep brown eyes. She wore the exact something as the others but her flames were dark purple. She had as much jewelry on as the first one did.
The last one had long red hair. She had stunning emerald green eyes. She had one the same thing as the others but her flames were dark blue. She had no jewelry on like the second one.
The first one speaks and says, “Which one of you is the spirit detective for Konenma and Who are you.”
“I’m Yuske and I’m the spirit detective for that toddler. Who are you” he said.
“Who are the other three and I’m Midnight.” the first one said.
“The short one over there in black is Hiei. The dude with the red hair is Kurama. And the tall one is Kuwabara. Who are the other three and why are you here?”
“The blonde headed is Athena. The Brown headed is Rikku. and the red head is shadow. We work for King Emma as his spirit detectives. We were sent her to help you on this mission.”
‘maybe she really is my twin sister, but maybe not. The only way to find out is to see her attacks.’ thought Hiei.
To Be CoNtInUeD………
F: Hope you liked itS: please review
Ku: she also needs characters for an upcoming tournament. If you want your character in the tournament in a review please give her the following information:
Name of character
Age
Race (wither human, demon or half demon, if they have demon blood in them please put what kind.)
Gender
Your real name (so she can thank you)
What are the weapons he/she uses
And a small bio. With what she wears and special attacks.
H: you can also create team names for the different teams just submit it to her through reviews.
F: Hope you liked this cahpter
S: rember to review and she will post the next chapter up faster.
H & K: if you don’t review we will attack you
F & S& K& H: hope you liked the story and please review!!