Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Yu Yu Hakusho: The Soul Controller ❯ The Soul Controller ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

Yusuke:Have you guys seen Keiko?

Kuabara: Not really. She dissappeared around the time people started to overheat and passout.

All of a sudden Hiei appears with a note.

Yusuke: Still delivery boy, eh?

Hiei:I dont want to hear it Yusuke. Something bad is going on.

Yusuke reads the note to everyone.

Koenma's note reads: Yusuke, a new villain has surfaced. But, he has a different ability than any other villain. He controls souls. And since you have died and your soul is a little tainted, he can take yours more easy. He has to chant something but all we know is that it takes 4 seconds or less.

Yusuke: Oh god! He is the one behind the people who have been fainting. He has been taking their souls.

Kuwabara: Yusuke, you dont think?

Yusuke: He has Keiko! Hiei did Koenma tell us where to find this guy?

Hiei: All we know is somewhere in Demon World.

Yusuke: How do we get there?

Hiei: I don t know but something is going on around the block.

All three run around and see a tall bulky figure.

Yusuke: Hey you, stop!

Yusuke chases the guy down an alley.

Yusuke: Now I know its you! Give back Keiko!

The mysterious guy chants something.

Yusuke: Hey what ar-

Yusuke drops down lifeless.

Hiei: There is Yusuke!

Kuwabara: No it can't be, he is dead!

Hiei:It has to be the guy that steals souls. Yusuke wouldn't just drop dead in 30 seconds.

Kurama: The guy did take Yusuke's soul. I was too late to stop it.

Hiei: Kurama, where did you come from?

Kurama: I was looking for Yusuke. I know where to find the guy.

Hiei: We have to go find him. We need to save Yusuke.

Kuwabara: Thats a first.

Hiei: If anyone will kill Yusuke, it wil be me.

Kurama: Look with every soul he grows stronger and since he took Yusukes he is going to be through the roof.

Hiei: We best be going.

Koenma appears in his adult form

Koenma: I ll go to. I owe Yusuke.

Kurama: I guess we could use all the help we got.

Koenma: We need go get going before its too late.

The 4 set out to save Yusuke and Keiko.



I need you guys to review but it will get better I am just not very good at openings.