| "Just another day in paradise." Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just expecting some fluff when I started reading it, but I SOO love it!! And the characters are so deep, you did a really good job because they feel so, just, real! I, personally, love the NarutoxSasuke pairing, and just... wow. WOW. Wow. O_o I am in awe of your total awesomeness. *bow* I'm going to jump up and down like the total fangirl I am when you update!!! If you come up with any other awesome stories like this, e-mai me (buddhaarmada@yahoo.com) I cannot WAIT to read more of your work!! *wanders off to read Broken*
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Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just expecting some fluff when I started reading it, but I SOO love it!! And the characters are so deep, you did a really good job because they feel so, just, real! I, personally, love the NarutoxSasuke pairing, and just... wow. WOW. Wow. O_o I am in awe of your total awesomeness. *bow* I'm going to jump up and down like the total fangirl I am when you update!!! If you come up with any other awesome stories like this, e-mai me (buddhaarmada@yahoo.com) I cannot WAIT to read more of your work!! *wanders off to read Broken*
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooo...I just read the reviews. Someone said...no yaoi. That's just wrong. More more *much* more yaoi!!! ^____^ Please!
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 19:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Yaay! Another chapter. Poor Naruto. And Sasuke. nice to see them getting a little closer in this chapter, and that Naruto is able to make the distinction between Itachi and Sasuke. That's a relief. Looking forward to more. Thanks heaps.
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Reviewed By: ochibi-chan On: October 04, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is such an enjoyable read. Somehow you've managed to create a completely alternate universe but with the characters and their roles in this world perfectly consistant and complimentary with the original. Thank you for writing something story and character driven and not yaoi for the sake of yaoi. I think that there is something extremely powerful about comraderie and companionship between friends that doesn't necessitate sexual intimacy, so thanks for just keeping it shonen-ai so far. It's a breath of fresh air from lots of other fanfics. Awkward sentence structure and grammar/punctuation can be a little distracting, but there has been steady improvement (esp. since "Broken," which I really enjoy btw), so keep up the good work! Your creativity and vivid imagery keeps me waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: De On: October 02, 2005 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good story. Honestly. But it would be perfect if the main pairing wasn't yaoi. Try it out, will ya? Just for a while? And change it back afterwards? Anyway, good story so far, but don't do it yaoi. Please. It's enjoyment will dissappear if you do. Anyway, my opinion.
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Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grr. Damn Orochimaru... Lol, I liked that last line, even if it was pretty dry. Very cop-in-the-morning-ish. I can't wait for Broken btw. Hurrrrrrrrrryyy!
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Reviewed By: Cayasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's so awesome!! Update soon plz!! I like your other story broken, but I just absolutely love this one! Poor Naru-chan...
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Title: HI.
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWOW this is cool. I read some of the other one (Broken I think) but it's soooooo long. It's also kind of slow after the first chapter or so. But this is good. -Choister
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Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 09, 2005 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... And here I was thinking that Sasuke was some kind of prodigy. All those terrible things. Oh. I'm really not into those fetish sites at all. (shudders) I like fun, normal people fetishes. Not disturbing rape scenes. Keep updating anyway. It works here. =)
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Title: Beefcake
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 30, 2005 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH. MAN. KEEP UPDATING. I don't even know what to say. Good job? Aw, Sasuke and Naruto are so cute? NO. More like DIE, OROCHIMARU! YOU MICHAEL JACKSON PREDECESSOR WANNABE, YOU! GRR! I HOPE EBISU RAPES YOU IN YOUR SLEEP!!! X|
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Reviewed By: bookworm51485 On: August 27, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!!! How could you stop there it was getting good. That is horrible though, not only do they rape him but the put it on the internet for other people to see. That's pretty bad. I'm so happy to see an update though, love this story. Though you already know this cause I've said it many times. So please update soon, really soon. Both stories. Write write write as fast as your fingers can type and update. Wow that kind of rhymed. Anyways love it, update soon.
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Reviewed By: arathful monkey On: August 27, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic, i thought it would dissolve in to smut at chapter 2. i lke it better this way. for the love of monkeys UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 04, 2005 14:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
No time to really review, but awesome job on this! I like the way you wrote this: seems more fun than Broken. (To write.) Anyway, please update this soon, although like the other guy said, don't slack off on Broken. Good job, again. =)
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Reviewed By: bookworm51485 On: July 28, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories but what's happened to this one. It hasn't been updated in so long, then again maybe not that long but it seems like a long time to me because I've been waiting for the next chapter. Are you still working on it or are you just focusing on Broken. I hope you don't forget about this story though I do really like Broken. You like making Orochimaru a freaky perverted villain who attacks poor Naruto in your stories it seems:). I like, anyways keep up the good work and please update soooooon.
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