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Reviewed By: deucez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very well written fic, in fact, I can only hope that the fics I write will turn out half as good as this. It wasn't bogged down by spelling or grammatical errors that other lemons are generally plagued with. This s a fic I would read more than once for its enjoyment. I am fairly green to the Full Metal Alchemist universe but even I was able to easily follow the story without being utterly lost. I look forward to reading other works of yours.
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Title: DAMN
Reviewed By: Eva_Angel On: September 24, 2005 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh gad thta was... damn/... was absolutly awesome!!!!!!! even is not them type of fic I used to read... but is the best... YOU RLZ!!!! Eva
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Title: Awesome lemon and story
Reviewed By: HackerSeig On: August 11, 2005 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you did a good job on everything. thanks for making it all realistic instead of doing the thing where everything goes perfect all the time. I mean there was actually a problem and some issues they had deal with. i hope to read many more of your fanfics in the future HackerSeig
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: xKawaii Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so very hard to find good EdxWinry fiction. And, especially lemons. Thank God that you wrote this. I was beginning to give up on finding one. I loved it.
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Title: ABSOLUTELY THE BEST!!!
Reviewed By: Rizu-chan On: July 21, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely THE best PWP lemon fanfiction I have EVER, EVER read!!!! Incredible!!! If you don't write anymore soon, I'm definately not going to be able to live out my life feeling "complete". It's absolutely THE best, and I want you to know that I'd give anything for you to continue writing fanfiction like this. Please e-mail me when you do!!! otaku_rizu@yahoo.com is my e-mail. Hope to see some more fanfictions from you soon!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: Apathetic Empath not logged in On: July 16, 2005 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you so much right now for writing this. It was AWESOME! Ed was OOC at some parts, but it was totally understable by the end of the fic. This was so hot!! I'm so sweating from reading this now (...that so says something about me, ne? lol) Anyway, wonderful work with this. I've never read a lemon quite like it before, especially for these two. You really went against the grain, and I so love you for that. It gets boring reading things that are all the same. Anyway, once again, awesome work! A.E.
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Reviewed By: Huskul On: July 14, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... that is the best story i have ever read, so deatailed. LOVE IT
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Reviewed By: sestrilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it i love this kind (call me sick if you want to) not alot of aothers can do that and trun it in to somethang nice to read
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Reviewed By: sestrilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it i love this kind (call me sick if you want to) not alot of aothers can do that and not trun it in to somethang nice to read
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Reviewed By: sestrilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it i love this kind (call me sick if you want to) not alot of aothers can do that and not trun it in to somethang nice to read
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Reviewed By: Aki-chan On: July 10, 2005 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow. Omg wow. It's hard to find some awesome PWP EdxWinrys out there, and this one takes the cake, no doubt. I loved the Demanding!Ed and Nervous!Winry, and Ed was so bad-ass and SEXY...damn, Winry's a lucky gal. Anyway, great job! I loved it!
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Title: Whoa.
Reviewed By: Karasura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was very...just wow!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 09, 2005 16:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was, for lack of a better word, Hot!
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Reviewed By: axel720 On: July 08, 2005 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!! absolutely awesome!!!!XD your writing is so detailed and descriptive^^
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