| "Uninvited" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: lonely_dreamlover On: October 02, 2005 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Err.... I forgot to add this: You should put more spaces between the text because it's pretty hard and straining to read.
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Reviewed By: lonely_dreamlover On: October 02, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was pretty cool!!! Vampires and Weiss... that's a great combo. And with Ran being a half-breed. err... is this gonna be a schu/aya??? I'm hoping for brad/aya. Nyweyz, when's the others gonna appear? hehehe.... UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: violafic On: August 04, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very promising story with original storyline. A nice prologue to something darker and exciting. Keep on writing!!
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Reviewed By: MJai On: August 04, 2005 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're storying is interesting so far and I'd like to read more of it. Can you do something about Chapter 2 though? It's difficult to read with all the paragraphs jumbled together. Update soon.
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