| "Love cannot be chosen or be broken" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: How could you?!!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHYYY??!!! How could you let it end like this! I need to see another chapter, and I need to see it soon. Okay? Okay.
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Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this story, vegeto stuck in the fusion and haveing to make life changing decisions was an awsome idea. it was full of emotion and drew me in, i also liked how vegeto would say something that goku would say with vegeta's attitude and harsh language. it was really good and i look forward to your other dbz works.
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Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to see something that isn't about BV around here. God they're getting so boring. BTW, good work, and the Bulma bashing was a nice touch too. I'd love to read the next chapter. Drop me a line some time. MSN: the_strategoes@hotmail.com AOL: khandyCa2003
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