| "Love cannot be chosen or be broken" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED FOR SO LONG, THE STORYLINE HERE IS ABSOLUTELY EXQUISITE!!!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: WARRIOR007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SCREAMED NO WHEN I CAME TO THE END, UP DATE SOON PLZ THE STORY HAS BEEN EXQUISITE SO FAR, IT GETS BETTER WITH EVERY WORD
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Let me guess, you love Bulma, right?
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going pretty good and I would like to see more.
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Reviewed By: METRION On: September 13, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have never read a story like this, and u are doing a very good job of writing it. i expect more great chapters from u, dont let me down!
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Reviewed By: anime luvr On: September 05, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
v v v good!!!!!! thats so evilleaving us in suspense!!! what does chichi want to do????? lets hope its the things all us readers expect. think there needs to be lemons!!!! but.....does vegeto stay that way or does he eventually split bak??? glad he picked chichi, bulmas a bitch!!!!! good writing, keep going
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Reviewed By: Azari Kaiya On: August 26, 2005 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah, this isnt the end is it? the status says its finished...but come on, you could add more to the story, i mean Gohan doesnt like Vegeto yet, you couldve done something so eventually theyd like each other. i dunno, but PLEASE dont leave it there! youre killing me!
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Title: Love cannot be chosen or be broken
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn that was hot... very hot.. mate them already.lmao. great chapter can't wait to read more ok....
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Title: evil evil evil
Reviewed By: bulma chan50 On: July 31, 2005 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could you do that you are so evil. as soon as it said about vegeta leving bulma that was it, the water works started. but you know what? i am so like bulma, i'll cry if i cant get what i want. please dont write anything so mean again. please thoughtless.
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Title: Oo lala!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now it get's interesting. It's like a love triangle only with two people. Man it's wierd to think of him as a totally different person.
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Reviewed By: Cheese grater On: July 30, 2005 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Nakazaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah~!!!! Cliffhanger >_________< u must update ok~?! Keep it up its sooooo goood ^^
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Title: How could you?!!
Reviewed By: Sakag [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHYYY??!!! How could you let it end like this! I need to see another chapter, and I need to see it soon. Okay? Okay.
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Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this story, vegeto stuck in the fusion and haveing to make life changing decisions was an awsome idea. it was full of emotion and drew me in, i also liked how vegeto would say something that goku would say with vegeta's attitude and harsh language. it was really good and i look forward to your other dbz works.
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Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good to see something that isn't about BV around here. God they're getting so boring. BTW, good work, and the Bulma bashing was a nice touch too. I'd love to read the next chapter. Drop me a line some time. MSN: the_strategoes@hotmail.com AOL: khandyCa2003
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