| "Changing the Past, Changes the Future" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 20:43 CDT
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Hi! I'm glad that you updated, I love this fic so far! However, I think there may be a missing chapter between chapters 6 and 7... both have the same chapter contents but different titles. Mispost, maybe? Please update as soon as you are able! Thanks for sharing this!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 03:24 CST
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i cant wait till u update ^-^
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 26, 2007 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is wonderful. Totally orginal. I like it alot. Keep going. I can't wait to see how this will all play out. Two thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: kittenclaws [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story heck I love all your stories. I have been reading this story since last year and it get better everytime for the simple fact that it is different from all the rest. I get so tired of the same old same but with your stories thats not a problem. I am not going to beg you to update because I hate it when people do that. All I wanted to say was great story awesome plot loves it laterz
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: April 09, 2006 02:44 CDT
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Never Mind I think I figured it out. Okay first we have the Original Timeline back 553 years Were the timeline is the same as the Tv Show one and my guess is that Kikyo falls out of love with Onigumo and develops feelings for Inuyasha because there is no Tomiko. Then we have the timetravel timeline were Original Kagome timetravels and in this timeline Tomiko is not known and the timeline goes like the Show, and Original Kagome cuts her hair because she doesn't want to be associated with Kikyo and wants to be herself, then the well sends her back 553 years. Were we now have the Altered Original timeline were Tomiko is known and she stays away from Onigumo and causes Inuyasha to fall for her, which means that Kikyo will not fall out of love with Onigumo and develop feelings for Inuyasha because he now has someone. And kills Kagome and (now this is were I figure how Kagome can be a reincarnation of herself) and since Kagome is in the past her Soul gets rerouted back into the now Altered Kagome. Were we now have the Altered Timetravel Line because now Inuyasha is not pining for Kikyo but his lost mate Tomiko, and now he treats Kagome differently, and she feels she has no identity were this she cuts her hair not to look like Kikyo but to have her own identity. And then the well sends her back in time to the Altered Original timeline. Were she now creates an Altered-Altered Original timeline becasue she doesn't avoid Onigumo and lets Inuyasha claim her and this time Naraku has, unlike the Altered Original timeline Naraku,now desires Tomiko/Kagome but she survives her encounter with Naraku and gets sent back the Altered Timetravel timeline. Which now becomes the Altered-Altered Timetravel timeline because the memories become updated with what she has done in the Altered-Altered Original timeline. Thats like 6 Timelines interwoven together or maybe 5. Sorry the computer didn't load it correctly
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: April 09, 2006 02:42 CDT
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Never Mind I think I figured it out. Okay first we have the Original Timeline back 553 years Were the timeline is the same as the Tv Show one and my guess is that Kikyo falls out of love with Onigumo and develops feelings for Inuyasha because there is no Tomiko. Then we have the timetravel timeline were Original Kagome timetravels and in this timeline Tomiko is not known and the timeline goes like the Show, and Original Kagome cuts her hair because she doesn't want to be associated with Kikyo and wants to be herself, then the well sends her back 553 years. Were we now have the Altered Original timeline were Tomiko is known and she stays away from Onigumo and causes Inuyasha to fall for her, which means that Kikyo will not fall out of love with Onigumo and develop feelings for Inuyasha because he now has someone. And kills Kagome and (now this is were I figure how Kagome can be a reincarnation of herself) and since Kagome is in the past her Soul gets rerouted back into the now Altered Kagome. Were we now have the Altered Timetravel Line because now Inuyasha is not pining for Kikyo but his lost mate Tomiko, and now he treats Kagome differently, and she feels she has no identity were this she cuts her hair not to look like Kikyo but to have her own identity. And then the well sends her back in time to the Altered Original timeline. Were she now creates an Altered-Altered Original timeline becasue she doesn't avoid Onigumo and lets Inuyasha claim her and this time Naraku has, unlike the Altered Original timeline Naraku,now desires Tomiko/Kagome but she survives her encounter with Naraku and gets sent back the Altered Timetravel timeline. Which now becomes the Altered-Altered Timetravel timeline because the memories become updated with what she has done in the Altered-Altered Original timeline. Thats like 6 Timelines interwoven together or maybe 5.
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: March 25, 2006 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused about how Kagome can be a reincarnation of Herself. I can understand going through time the first time but why would her previous self cut her hair if that previous self never heard of 'Tomi' the first time and wouldn't the events before her previous self going back in time an extra 50 years be slightly different than the current Kagome experienced. *blinks and shakes head* This time paradox thing is so confusing like if how if Kagome got Inuyasha's ageing ability and got stuck in the Fuedal Era and lives to the modern time which means until the other Kagome got stuck there would be two Kagome's.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 14:21 CST
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Sesshomaru subsists entirely on dry martinis.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 13:04 CDT
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good question(at the end) he eats demon food of course! k, update soon please. ^^
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Title: love it really
Reviewed By: kittenclaws [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a great story and i can't wait for the rest of it i mean wow it is awesome i love it thanks for sharing this story with us
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Title: What the?????
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but there is onbe thing that is bothering me. WHAT THE !!!!!!!!!!!!!! I bow down to you. I am so mixed up. That there are no words for it. Wonderful story and so many plots twisted that i think M. Nightshamal(sp??) would be proud!
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 15:16 CDT
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That's right! Be jealous! LOL! On with the hunt for Naraku! If he lays a hand on Kagome then I'll jump in there and give him a piece of my mind! Or whatever's left of my crazed head. Ah! This is crazy! Just please continue with the story, its really good.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: September 15, 2005 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy jealous that's new!HA HA ! Anyway keep writing please
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Reviewed By: Michi4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, where did the idea come from that Inuyasha marks someone for his mate like that..sexually and not? I know he's a dog demon and all, but like is that something everyone just knows? lol...this is a great story. i was reading it on FF.net but i wanted the unedited version :p Awesome story. It really is unique!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got caught. I hope Kagome mother is in her sweet loving mood because if she's not their in trouble.But I don't know if Souta would had opened the door he would have been scared for life. And Granpa who probably run down stairs and find some spells to try and purify Inuyasha.
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