| "Missions of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WHAAAAT?!!!!!! Come On! you CAN'T just up and leave it THERE! Update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 21:35 CDT
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 14:36 CDT
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This is an excalent fic and I only wish that there was more Kurama/Kagome in it insted of just Hiei/Kagome.... I understand how Souta feels about Inuyasha comming and how much betrail he now holds against his sister. Perhaps Kagome will try to find the Yu Yu Gang and offer information for them protecting her brother while she goes back into the well. I do have a question however... where's Souta? And why did it say 'we' in the note? Is Inuyasha teaming up with Kagomes' father? If that is true then Kagome doesn't stand a chance alone... and perhaps only Hiei and Kurama can really help her. Plus, what about school? she hasn't been there or mentioned it in forever... well until next time With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Nostalgic Beauty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh! You're evil! Please write the rest, I'm begging you!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's been a couple of months since you updated -- I sure hope yopu get a chance SOON to write more! I'm on pins and needles with the last cliffhanger! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 17:30 CDT
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OMG THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MEANIST CLIFFHANGER IN THE WORLD!!!! But great story please hurry and contine!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 2: I like the direction this story is going in, but I have a few suggestions. The first would definitely be proof reading. Most of the errors aren\'t in spelling (though they're there), but tense mistakes. Well, that and you sometimes use the wrong word (i.e. - you type, "He went threw the wall" instead of "He went through the wall"). And I know you said you edited the first chapter, but even that has spelling and grammar mistakes in it. I'm not sure if you do this later on in the story, but it might be easier to mark off where you change scenes. Another thing I wanted to comment on is the characterization. I know there will be some 'OOC-ness', but some of their actions are completely out of character (Kagome being warrior woman for starters, not to mention sitting Inuyasha for no reason). There are a lot of authors that like to exaggerate, but Kuwabara really isn't that much of an idiot and Miroku is not a complete lech. They're more... comic relief. Their idiocy and/or perversions are only brought into the story line when needed (i.e. - Miroku purposefully groping Sango to help break up a fight between Inuyasha and Kagome). Plus, most of both… afflictions, for lack of a better word, stop after the first seasons. It's also a little strange that Kagome would be a 'master' in martial arts with her abilities/techniques as a priestess and sword fighting, especially when, aside from the three-month time limit, the people she's learning from aren't masters themselves (far from it actually). It's only been a year, right? With some experience, Kagome'd probably help out, but she's not one to start a fight; nor immediately go on the offensive. Kagome's usually the last one to enter a fight if she does at all. All I'm saying is that Kagome would probably need to train for years to get to the level of excellence you have her at. Okay... I'll stop critiquing now.
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 20:50 CDT
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That was brillaint. I love this fanfic. I dont believe i truly have and critism for it. Please update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 03:24 CST
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Please update real soon. What will happen now. I'm sure if Kagome ever meets Koenma face to face, who would punch him or he will meet her furry for sending stalkers to her Shrine.
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: sesskags_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CAN YOU JUST END IT RIGHT THERE! THATS JUST MEAN! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Missions of the Heart
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That sucks to be Kagome. If I were her and the boys were following me and acting like my Mom or something, I would seriously and literally would tell the boys to fuck off or just yell at them, lolz. Please update soon oh and by the way; what's taking you sooo long?!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're story is great, I can't wait for you to update, it's in my top 5!!!
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Title: One of the best fics ever
Reviewed By: Mikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic! I have read over 60 fics on this site and yours is easily in the top 10. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING! So many people stop in the middle of writing their fics. so please don't do that!
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Reviewed By: sexysesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! It's freakin' awsome!! Update soon!
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Title: gangsta5
Reviewed By: gangsta5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 21:22 CST
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Please update soon!I really like this story.It's one of my top 5 stories!
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