"Vegeta's Top 10 Rules for Dating His Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: WhiteXRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 20:05 CDT Comment/Review: That was good. Sounds like Vegeta so much! You should do something like this with another character! -WXR
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Reviewed By: autumn On: July 10, 2002 22:03 CDT Comment/Review: That was SO funny! My favorites:
“The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: … Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness.”
“I have two hands, a shovel, and five acres behind the house. Do not trifle with me.”
Great stuff! |
Reviewed By: Lee_Chan On: May 12, 2002 10:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO FUNNY! I HAVEN'T LAUGHED THIS HARD IN ABOUT A WEEK!!!! LOL THIS IS DEFINETLY THE HIGHLIGHT OF MY DAY!!! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: March 30, 2002 04:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: lol lol lol lol lol .... *gasps* I can't stop...laughing... lol |
Reviewed By: Cowgirl_6_26_87 On: March 26, 2002 19:20 CST Comment/Review: LOVED IT!! That is SOOOOOOOO Vegita! The rules do get a little strict, but hey, that's Vegita! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 15:14 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: If I was a male, I would have to keep that in mind. Thank God I am not. I am glad my daddy isn't crazy like that. This very funny. |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 03:47 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Hilarious! If that´s not Vegeta, than nothing is. I could just hear him grinf the words into some poor boys face! |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 20:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: as the parent (abet step-parent) of a teenage daughter, I have recited these rules on more than one occasion. I laughed my ass off seeing them applied to Vegeta. I don't think he'll need the shovel though, a quick blast of ki should inncernate them to nothing more than ash. lol |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 15:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: ROFLMBO! This is exactly what my father would say! lol. And people ask me why I don't have a boyfriend! lol |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 07:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOW THATS HOW TO WRITE A COMEDY!!!!!! i haven't seen a good comedy fic in ages!Well done u! :) |
Reviewed By: Felidae On: December 29, 2001 05:22 CST Comment/Review: This could totally happen! I actually think that he is doind this with Bra's dates. So cool and funny! I so can see him telling the poor boy those rules! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Trunks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 16:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is quite amusing! I wouldn't be surprised if Vegeta DID do something like that! |
Reviewed By: thecod [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 16:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that's awesome! hope you do another one |
Reviewed By: Sailor Libra On: December 28, 2001 14:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS WAS WAS ABSOLUTE GENIUS!
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 11:19 CST Comment/Review: It was really funny, but I happen to know that you just put in names and changed some descriptions from a chain e-mail that's going around. |
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