| "Love's Perfect Match" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 18:44 EDT
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Oooh! Anyways, awesome chapter and check out my new story Heartbreakers. I wish you luck and prosperity
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Reviewed By: Assane On: August 04, 2005 15:06 EDT
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HI I love ur fic and pleeeeaaaase keep updating, and thank u so much for the reviews on my ficcy!!
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Title: new chapter
Reviewed By: inuzbab2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u shold write and/or put in the new chpters.(if your still working on it.)
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Reviewed By: STAR963852 On: August 02, 2005 22:23 EDT
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LOVE IT UPDATE SOON
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 02:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, very cute and funny. Can't wait until the next chapter. robinstar
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 23:54 EDT
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We're going to hate you? Is there going to be Inu/Kik? If so, I hate you already. Well, I look forward to the dance, and am very curious about possible events there.
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Title: the story so far.
Reviewed By: Crimson Warrior On: August 01, 2005 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is funny and cool.
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 16:48 EDT
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MM never lets you see updates. I hate when that happens. I just happened stumbled on your story and here comes chapter 9. Anyways, YEY! Kag and Inu! Mir and San! I love it. Now I can't wait 'til next chapter. I hope MM won't mess up. ^_^!
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Title: Kenz
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great keep it up! Glad you updated.
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 11:27 EDT
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Great chap....kind of kinky even. Anyways, I just updated He will be loved so MM might not let you know. Keep up the great work. ^_^!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: TiannaBannana (NSI) On: July 31, 2005 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww this is an awesome story Kikyou is a whore, man i hate her *grumbles* well really good story Miroku and Sango are the best pair ever :) well update ASAP thanx
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 00:14 EDT
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Sango/Miroku fluff! Though, I would totally kill the bastard later if he felt me up like that. Where are Inuyasha and Kagome when you need them? Well, great chapter, let's see what Kikyo has planned for those two.
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Reviewed By: babykittykawaii0406 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wants ta read more!!!! I'm going crazy!!!! It's soooooo good!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
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Title: Very Cute!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really fun fic & i SO agree with your fic recommendations. Enemy Mine & He will be loved are the shit!
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Title: Katsudoogirl@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Kats On: July 28, 2005 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea but I have to point out that you use 'kami' inaccuratly. Mou would be a more accurate way to say 'geez' or as an exclamation of frustration. Kami is only used in reference to the gods themselves, not used as an exclamation and it it really throws me off when I read it and I'm sure I'm not the only one. The only other real issue I had was with how many times you had people 'scream' in your fic. No yelling, exclaiming or saying loudly...just screaming. It sometimes gives an image that doesn't seem like it fits in with the rest of the scene. Other then those issues I really do like this story. The idea and the general plot are quite good.
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