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Title: F.F.R.G
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 18:50 CDT
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The sun crested over the horizon spreading the warm glow of morning. Its ascension was an answered prayer to the exhausted villagers below. War had begun between human and demon. Night held no comfort for the villagers I found this particular line very attractive and it is the detail and descriptioning in this fic that makes it so appealing. I would personally recommend trying to keep thoughts and spoken words different by not using italics for wording (even though it is an interesting tactic) I enjoyed the fic and I encourage you to continue writing. The plot is thick and interesting. Well-done! -F.E*
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 05:02 CDT
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stalker? Me? Are you nuts? XP Wow... I can't believe you read the horrible drivel I call writing. This is awesome. Kids should read it in school... lol It's amazing and impressive. I'm on the edge of my seat. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XP Wow... just... wow... Is it Kagome or Kikyo with the arrow? Or is it someone else? Don't tell me I overlooked it... XP
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Title: *Twitch*
Reviewed By: Geeky_JJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 08:50 CDT
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I hate your cliffs...*Twitch*...*twitch* GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR...*cries* How could you?!!! My Naraku...I mean...^^
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Title: To Change Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: MoonVoid(notsignedin) On: August 11, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YOU HORRIBLE TEASE!! how could you do that!?! do you know how horrible that is!?! oh, how i weep to see you tease us(ME) so.......*cries in a corner* Please update. (cleanse face to regain misguided Dignity) Please update it sounds like a wonderful story.. -Ja ne.
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Title: DOOOOOOOOOM
Reviewed By: Geeky_JJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evilness is sexy ^^ I LOVE IT!!! And i love Naraku.*throws bunch's of candy @ you* You make my Lover Naraku sound so perfect and so hot. As you do with Your man sesshy might i add ^^*fave's you* I love that sang. And if you flame this lovly person people...I will stick shippo up your ass, I swear! I swear to BOB!!!!
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Title: To Change Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: evil...sweet!
Reviewed By: ryuu_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here I thought I was the only one who could be cruel with a fic. Congratulations! You're off to a great start with this fic; it's well written, it's original (to my knowledge), it's very descriptive but not overly, it's (at least semi-)believable, and best of all it reminds me of the fic I'm writing (you should read it; I think you'd like it [it's called "Speaking Through Dreams" {if you do read it, there're four chapters, but to get to them all you have to, from the prologue, scroll to the chapter 1 and hit "view chapter". That's the only way to get them all to show, and they only show in the scroll menu; it's very weird}]). My only critique would be to work on your transitions a little. The scene by the well was a little "jumpy". Keep up the good work and update soon! Akuhonou Ryuu
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 06:58 CDT
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If you think Sesshomaru is one to reckon with... well... you know me, don't you? I want the chapter you took away. NOW. Ok, ok, when you're ready. XP let me know. :)
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Title: *Snickers*
Reviewed By: Swan_lake [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* Its so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps naraku* Your so evil!!!! *naraku glomps sierra* Naraku- Your my wittle pchco ^^ Sierra-*eats cookie* TeeHee!!^^ *throws lots of cookie's to andrea* Sorry for not commenting sooner XD................. *points to naraku* He was keeping me from you!!!! *naraku starts to undress* *me nose bleeds* *see's sesshy with tape recorder* *hits sesshy* Take that evil demon!!!! *smashes sesshy's head with boulder* DIE ZOMBIE!!!!
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Title: To Change Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Omg!!
Reviewed By: Kisa_loves_u On: July 29, 2005 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOMG!! *CRYS* I LOVE IT THIS IS THE BEST!! WOW... WOW!! WOW!!! WOW!! YOUR GRAMMAR IS AWSOME AND THIS IS VERY VERY GOOD! WOW! THAT ALL I CAN SAY!! And you are so mean! Tortureing people! XD j/k I gots to wait for u to put up the next chapter! This story is really worth waiting for! SPIDERS! ~Kisa~
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Reviewed By: Lucient not logged in On: July 24, 2005 02:26 CDT
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thanks so much for all your kind words on my fics. :) I'd be glad to reciprocate if someone ((cough cough)) would update. ;) James
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 08:57 CDT
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Very nicely written. I was draw to your story because my current fic is the opposite! LOL, the slaves are the demons. I've enjoyed this. Write more soon! :) James
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Title: To Change Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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