| "Keep Your Friends Close But Your Enemies Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Write more!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whooo! Excellent writing, love how this story is coming along. Though, some sentences were a bit out of place but that could've been easily fixed with a beta or sending to each other (that I see there's 2 authors working on this story). It is in character which I love. +faves the story to read more
|
Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i totally like this fic...please updated it asap....
|
Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 08:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Owhh....only one chapter??...mmm....updated it soon okay....
|
Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin On: August 26, 2005 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVE it! You better write more! I wish Death note was more popular so I could get more yaoi ficcies, but you're good enough. Pity you wouldn't write a lemon... *sad*
|
Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 05:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
WWooohooo!!! updated it a.s.a.p!!! double thumbs up!!
|
Reviewed By: yellow On: August 14, 2005 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol--just a critique---Fandengo'd ? Do they have that in Japan--just wondering--a slight mistake that's all. Correct me if I'm wrong, otherwise I love the writing..also for ch4--I thought it was kind've quick of Raito to ask the same question "Ryuuzaki is such a long name..can I call you something shorter..." so soon after he failed the first time. It seemed to obvious for the likes of Raito. But then again, fanfiction isn't perfect and this bit of suspense adds to it I guess :) again-overall--2 thumbs and 10 toes up!!
|
Reviewed By: Phidias Bagel On: August 08, 2005 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! The Death Note fanfiction! This story is great! I hope you update it soon.
|
Reviewed By: Ginaamashi On: August 02, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the only Death Note fanfic on here you must update!
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
