| "Nine & half Weeks...DBZ Style" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 19:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! O_O;;;;;;;;; GOKOU GONE HENTAI X_________________X;;;;;
I think I might die now x.x
That was....whoa.
One thing tho...you mentioned Saiyajins before. This, I assume, was before Radditsu arrived, right? But otherwise...that was...SCARY! My god...I hope Gokou isn't gonna be hentai-ish like that for the rest of his life x.x;; |
Reviewed By: Naditz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2002 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best Bulma/Goku FanFic I ever read
Cant wait till its finshed ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 11:09 EST
Comment/Review:
I just got done reading the ending on FF.net... all I can say is... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*gasping... takes another deep breathe*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*panting*
Okay, now that that's out of my system... can I.. uh... have that alternate ending... please... I ran out of hankies from crying my eyes out... now I desperately need some G/B happiness. Please? With a chocolate covered Goku on top? |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww yeah... in the bathroom at the turtle perv's house... so yummy! I wanna know who heard em!!! Any way Bulma could thwap Chi with one of her own frying pans? Oh well, just a thought. Lol, oh spelling and grammar check (sorry) missing a word in either first or second sentence (can't remember which) where "she felt bad about what she done, should be she'd done or she had done. And there's a word missing somewhere further down... *smacks forehead* I'm such a lame brain, I totally forgot where it was, but if I find it I'll let ya know. Fantastic chapter though, even though I totally hate Bulma at this point *goes sickeningly green with envy* Anyway, can't wait for more, please email me ASAP when the next update's out at pareathe@aol.com
Thank you!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 11:44 EST
Comment/Review:
wwwwwhhhhhooooo was it?who was easdropping?I can't wait till the next chapter. Why is chichi- so prude, what she did anything sexual with goku other than kiss?how old are they supposed to be 13 or 14? |
Reviewed By: cat On: February 04, 2002 16:53 EST
Comment/Review:
hey, read this (completed version) on ff.net, (not sure if i reviewed there too) very good. steamy lemon :) and a nice plot. sad though, things don't work out the way Goku wants. maybe a sequel with them 'hooking up' again sometime later in the series? thanx for the good fic.:) |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: January 30, 2002 13:49 EST
Comment/Review:
I really liked this... it is really passionate, and the lemon was excellently written. |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 11:57 EST
Comment/Review:
Gokusgirl, this story is very good i would like to read more but, u might be stuck on something, e-mail me i can come up with good ideas. jsw097@aol.com |
Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2002 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay that was the best fic I've read so far. It seems most Bulma/Gokou fics at least hit the 'good' benchmark, but this...well just take a look at all your rating. As I said...PUBLISH!!! Maybe not this story, but you'd make millions as an author! ^_^v |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no fanfic can compare to this one |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 12:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'd never liked having Goku and Bulma together, but this is pretty good. Very well written, and believable too. I didn't think the characters were OOC... I think you wrote them very well. The only reason I gave mostly 9's instead of 10's was that I don't like the assumption that Yamcha is bad in bed. And also I still do like CC/G, but still, a very good fic! |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 10:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... well this took care of my heating problem for sure! *wipes sweat from brow and cranks A/C down to 60* Oh please, please continue very, very soon... I would love for this to become a full-fledged Bulma/Goku get together... I mean, Chichi has never been good enough for Goku *coughshesabitchcough* so keep going... on and on and on... MORE, MORE, MORE!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rogue On: January 22, 2002 05:18 EST
Comment/Review:
Yeah!! Encore!! Encore!! |
Reviewed By: eidos On: January 08, 2002 15:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good |
Reviewed By: W-Chan (Not Signed In) On: December 31, 2001 09:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Gokusgirl,
I read it at FFN and it's on my favorites list! Keep it up.
W-Chan |
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