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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 15:01 CDT Comment/Review: Awww. I was doing a happy little jig thinking you'd updated. Nevermind, this adoring fan will continue to wait for as long as you need, so just take your time Jania ^_^.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 10:20 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: neat story........very different to what I'm used to so i'm very intrigued. Keep writing.Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Nishii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 04:57 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: WOw, i really love your writing style, you definatly have a knack for really capturing that out of place adolcence feeling very well, you almost made me feel like i was in high school again just reading it. YOur grasp on human emotions make this a very pleasant in depth read, and i definatly love the angsty relationship thing you have going with everyone. And i would love to see a wonderfully long lemon in here somewhere to, but that is really my hentai side speaking. My only critism, and this is only because you said you wanted it, is that sometimes you need to go more into depth with the enivormental details, the last chapter especially had me lost, and wondering what was going on, and then you solved it but while it was happening it would have still been suspenful to have a grasp on the situation. I think your problem is the same one i've had, where in my mind i know what is happening but sometimes i neglect to put it into writing. An unbiased read can usually catch it before uploading. Also in serveral points you introduce things that have great potenial for become whole stories on the own and then end them abruptly, it may be better to fully develop one plot and work it to the max, than have twenty different plots which never get fully explored, it almost feels like you had alot of different ideas for this story and couldn't pick one to expound upon so you chose all of them. Not that i am complaing, like i said before i really, really enjoyed reading this, and you have definatly got me hooked, but as a so-so writer myself i thought i would give my opinion. Even if it is of little use. Please keep writing, i absoltly can't wait to read more, and i love where this is headed. Did i mention i am awed by the very simple but effective way you chose to explore Duo's emotional side without the ligthheartedness his looks usually warrent. very ingenous The always long winded- and never spell checked, Nishi
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:25 CST Comment/Review: Right, if that had been me in the cellar, I'd have done a runner as soon as a gush of wind crept across my neck. I mean, there aren't any windows are there... ooohhh... *laughs* that line about Duo being the mental patient was funny. Yes! Heero and Duo progress, now we're getting somewhere. Uh... okay.. have read a bit further and realised that Duo ran away... so maybe not as much progress as I thought. lol. But it WILL happen. Holds up fist in determination. Realises she isn't the writer. Pixie shakes fist at Jania and tries to look suitably threatening. It WILL happen. *laughs again*.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:10 CST Comment/Review: This is so totally worth the wait! Let me tell you, I like stories with unattractive Duo getting attractive Heero (though this is the first one I've ever read) lol. Anyway, I totally agree with love creating beauty. I love how Zechs is so kind in this fic. LOL! Oh my GOD! The dream! That was totally unexpected, but amazingly funny! PS - Did you know there's something wrong with your quotation marks. You've got two sets of 99s instead of a 66 and a 99.
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Reviewed By: RebelNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 19:35 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: um not to bother you but if you don't mind could you please write the next chapter and post it
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Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 07:04 CST Comment/Review: Sorry i havent revieuwt sooner, anyway another lovely chap ^.~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:52 CDT Comment/Review: Maybe it would be a stretch to actually like him, but I do feel a lot of pity for him... he did get cheated out by the man he was in love with.... Stupid Howard.... Poor drunk old man...
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Title: Blair here again Reviewed By: Jeminacat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 01:17 CDT Comment/Review: Sorry I havent reviewed lately. I havent had any internet service for a quite some time. So I've caught up on chapters and I'm still really liking this fic. Its all with the woo. I'm really digging how Duo is learning all of this from those boxes he found. It's really cool. Sorry if I seem to be repeating myself, its alittle late. Just wanted to let you know that I was still reading and still loved it.
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Reviewed By: Dragongirl85 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 12:05 CDT Comment/Review: It's a me, Mario! Lol, just kidding with you. It's me, Hanne. ^^ I've just sat down and read the first two chapters of your story and I must say that's it has really caught my interest. I've never seen Duo been written like that before and I find it very interesting. Lol, I hafta add a zit to my own Duo too if I wanna make him look more real. After all, I've barely passed 20 and have just recently gotten rid of my own zits. ^^ Anyway, back to buisness. I didn't get the chance to read it all, I don't have the time tonight, but what I've read so far is very good. I can't wait to sit down and read the rest and more! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: September 21, 2005 08:41 CDT Comment/Review: AAARG..NUUU..now i wanna know more...arg! Update soon?
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 09:51 CDT Comment/Review: Wow! I didn't think that Septum could be portrayed like that! It actually makes me want to like him... maybe... Anyway I want you to continue and soon!
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Reviewed By: Coran On: September 19, 2005 16:03 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Incredible story, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: mamajen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Everything in this is so original! I love it! I am impressed by your characterization of Duo. I also like the new twist you have added with Duo's uncle. Can't wait for more.
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Title: Ugly Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:31 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Three cheers!! I was so glad to see that this story has been updated and by several chapters too! Thanks for the praise, I've often thought about writing, but I just haven't gotten up the nerve yet. But, I love reading the stories by you guys and it is a constant source of inspiration for me to pursue it. Now, on to Duo. It looks like Trowa and Quatre will just ahve to agree to disagree or just admit that they are attracted to one another. As for Duo we can clearly see that he is leaning more toward Heero, but it looks like he really enjoys being around all of the guys, especially Wufei. Noin, on the other hand is just terrible! I think that it would be a very bad mistake for Zechs to marry her. Now we've gained a little bit more insight into Duo's Uncle Spetum. Poor man! It looks like he had very strong feelings for this man only to be used and tossed to the side when he got what he wanted. How sad for him. But, it looks like Duo is going to try to confront him. Well, in any case I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. It is nice to see though that he slowly but surely trying to come out of his shell and haviong friends will definely help him out more. As always this story is a pleasure to read so please update soon.
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