| "Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 15:26 CDT
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wicked. cud use more length but at least u put in more dialoge. yay dialoge! keep it up, make them talk more, maybe u cud like combine some chapters so it adds more length.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 21:23 CDT
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;.; ur killing 1 of the many luvs of my life!!! o.O ^_^ but at least bannies still breathin
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Reviewed By: mightyzoomaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 14:51 CDT
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v.v i still dont want kouga to die but it is fer tha fic and u r the writer.... soo ill let u but only this one time O.o keep up tha good work though
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 22:30 CDT
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hahahahaha! well, i wanted her off. (mesa Cat XP) didnt think itd b that short and the cliffy was perfect. -^_^- cant wait till the next update. hey, jewel, the boy is mine. (fyi, inside joke 2 evry1 else)
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Reviewed By: mightyzoomaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dam u cat lol and still u write wonderfully make more
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Reviewed By: mightyzoomaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another splended fic
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Title: kohaku forever
Reviewed By: shrimpo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, that was fairly morbid..., but it was good so update soon if you don't mind.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 01:00 CDT
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damn, u keep updating like this u'll bcum my new favorite author, woman. -^_^- keep it up, keep it up! ur writing is so much better when i actually LIKE the show.
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Reviewed By: DarknessBe4Dawn On: July 25, 2005 00:30 CDT
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Nice. True evil is not easy to write but you did an excellent job on both of your stories. Keep it up. ^-^
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i 4got 2 do the rate thingy.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 23:17 CDT
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o.O that was fast. XD luved it! lookin 4ward 2 the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 22:23 CDT
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luv it luv it luv it! evil evil evil! i doso luv the evil, sick twisted n wrong! gurl u never fail 2 intrigue me. NOW UPDATE... er, plz? XP
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Reviewed By: youngRuri On: July 24, 2005 21:55 CDT
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I like it. I can't wait for the next chapters. Understandable, that you made it short, so you don't ruin the surprise or something. ~Ruri~
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