| "Team YGO vs. Team Animasters" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 17:55 CDT
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Yay, I've read every chapter up to this point! I knw Rex would lose easily, and changing your writing to dialogue during the duals is a good idea. It would be stressful to type "This guy said, 'I summon so-and-so.'" That can be pretty stressful. Keep up the good work. I'm lovin' this so far!
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:31 CDT
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I've read up to chapter 5. I knew Evan would kick Rex's sorry little hyde. Rex is... well... he's pretty weak. I've not once seen him win anything. I love your choice of words. And Call of the Baby Dragon. that's creative is what it is! I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is great story!, then I started reading I thought it was going to be well laim but you showed me wrong! O.o I love it, great stroy line and plot please, please *chibi eyes* keep going.
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:25 CDT
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I just read chapter 3! This is the most awesome YGO fic ever!
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is funny and creative! Excellent work on this fic! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 18:15 CDT
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A Yami eh? What other secrets does Jake have? *pokes him* lol, really enjoyed this chappie, and update!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 11:13 CDT
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Sorry for my lack of updates....See, I had all of my future chapters typed in my laptop, except my laptop didn't have its internet connection yet. Oh well...but it's got the connection now, so I'm updating right after I type this review! ^^ Great chapter by the way...and I was right about Evan...Rex can't duel for his life, lol. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 07:29 CDT
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Lol, sorry yeah, I meant Tristan. ^^; Dueling! YES! Action....my money's on evan...rex has no chance, lol. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 07:51 CDT
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Nah, why'd I leave Mm.org? lol. Is it safe, having Duke and Serenity in the same room? Joey might be murdering him, lol. Anywayz, this was a great chapter, and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:07 CDT
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last review got cut off...anyways, I got frozen unfairly too >< This is a great fic, and you've got to update soon!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:05 CDT
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Sonja!! Hey! Haven't seen you for a long time...anyways, it's Lily Fairy here....
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Reviewed By: Feathered Dragon On: July 26, 2005 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic!!^__^ Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!
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