| "A Miko's Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Title: A Miko's Instincts
Reviewed By: 13pumpkins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is a total delight! Not only do the characters act the way I would like them to if I were able to write about them, but their actions feel true to the originals. The best praise I can give is that I would pay to see this in a book (novelization) or movie. I really hope you are able to get this or other stories published. It really worked for other series (i.e. the STAR TREK universe). Please continue this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 19:45 CDT
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Oh my that was a great chapter and at least Kikyou died very happy... teeheee oh my! Excellent!
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: October 20, 2005 17:05 CDT
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O.O you didn't! that's just wrong! Jaken and ... just thinking about it gives me the willies... *shudders* any way, another interesting chapter. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: blackwidow10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:18 CDT
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excuse me, but i must indulge... "the wicked witch is dead!" =P good chapter! (one of my favorites...bet u can't guess why) and yay for kagome getting revenge!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 20, 2005 12:06 CDT
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That was a funny chapter. Poor Kikyo. Oh well, she had been warned. Jaken's gonna get some? Ewwwww. Love this story. Update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 20:01 CDT
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Your story so far KICKS ASS!!!! I thought it was finished... but at the moment it has 23 AWESOME chapters!!! It's prolly my favorite fanfic I've ever read. Also maybe as a name for Sango's baby.. Natsume? I don't know the english translation.. I just think it's pretty.. anyway... just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your fanfic. Oh... also... I think u should make Naraku and Kikyo F@#$ and then kikyo die.. I don't like her.. :-D Anyway.. keep up the great work! Looking foreward to more chapters!
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Reviewed By: Alison W On: October 19, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your fan fic is really great. Keep up the good work. Um as for names I don't really know any but they should mean Strength for one of the sons of Inuyasha or Courage. The girl should mean somthing like compassion showing good qualitys from their parents. Mirokus and Sangos babys name should mean Gift from God..Or Buddha in Mirokus case. And maybe you could give one for Sesshy and Kaguras baby ^__^ just an idea but yeah keep up with the good work and i will work on those names finding means and the name to macth. ok bye bye ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagomechan100 On: October 19, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, keep writing, and you need to show me how to type stories like this, so please e-mail me at canimelover@aol.com and read my stories, oh and if you want to submit stories, you have to e-mail me before I put it on my website, okay, I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kazmireq On: October 17, 2005 17:17 CDT
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I really like your story! I have a suggestion for the girl's name:Motoko or Kisa. I don't know the english translation, if there is one, but I hope you think of some names!! =)
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Reviewed By: REALL BAD SPELLER On: October 15, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blueanother grate chapter by the way the names i postid befor are for Inu/Kag and Mir/Sans babeys
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my! This has been wonderful reading!!! One thing that should be put as a warning. "Do not eat or drink while reading this!"... lol I made the mistake twice. While reading the chapter with the 'egg' and the way it was 'delivered', I nearly choked on my drink and the second time was during the 'measurement' chapter. Man! I nearly spit my drink on my monitor. That would've been BAD... but it would have been so worth it!!! I've really, REALLY, enjoyed reading this story!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: blackwidow10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:10 CDT
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hahaha...best lullaby EVER! "That bitch is trying to kill me with sex!"
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: October 15, 2005 18:30 CDT
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i say go for the vote. and kikyo's going to die soon, right? she only has one more "episode" left. *giggles* death by sex. keep up the great work. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 15, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im glad Kinky-ho is almost'out of the picture'.You know I wouldn't mind being killed that way!Its the most pleaseriable way to go.I hope Kagome,InuYasha and now Sango and Miroku have fun killing her.Please update.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 15:20 CDT
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I had to tell my kid about the ants and read her Inuyasha's song. She bitched because I didn't sing that to her in the womb and she doesn't even like Inuyasha! Awesome chapter!
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