Reviewed By: Scrawl On: September 25, 2005 19:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Haha, Sasuke a friggin bastard. Great job with the story, I don't have any suggestions except what LinkinParkFreak said, you should describe the backrounds more thouroughly.
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