| "Zatch Ari Zacheri!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sadi's newest fan On: August 18, 2005 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome work, Sadi! The sex scene between kiyo and Zatch was so cute! Little Zatch getting Kiyo worked up like that... and Kiyo just taking over like that! I'll never ever watch the the show the same again!
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Title: more
Reviewed By: 55jazz555 On: August 17, 2005 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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Reviewed By: Lusted Upon On: August 17, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was right, I was surprissed. Zatch growing up! Just a thought, but will Kiyo ever use the spell again?
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Reviewed By: Randomness On: August 17, 2005 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I look in the section and saw that this story had the most reviews of all the Zatch Bell fics, I just thought they would all be flames. I read the story and was just amazed! Finally, at long last a Zatch/Kiyo fic has been written, and I cannot wait for the lemon! Please update! If you leave this story as is, it'll be a crime against humanity. You are officially the greatest author to write a Zatch Bell fic! I will follow you to the ends of hell and back! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! P.S. I'm assuming someone convinced you to write this, hence the 'The Bet' category, but you seem to be really into it. Keep up the passion and I'm sure that you will impress us all! Your newest fan, Randomness
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Reviewed By: Lusted upon On: August 17, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story and concept!I've just read the first chaptter, so I'm hoping to be really surprised!
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Reviewed By: aniyamasaki On: August 17, 2005 01:43 CDT
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cliffies suck! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lolly On: August 11, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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aww..I hate cliffhangers. Battles are awsommmme *heart*
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Reviewed By: Kudoss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 00:20 CDT
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Zatch wouldn't have happened to grow to Kiyo's age is he? >.> Great chapter by the way, wish I could say the same about mine. Update soon?
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Title: zatch air zacheri
Reviewed By: renmon On: August 01, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue writting it! I want to know what will happen!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aaml4ever On: July 29, 2005 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow great story! I havent read a Zatchbell fanfic this good so far. I woulod like to say that your a wonderful writer and you should continue on writing this fanfic because it shows some great promise. Also at first i thought this story was going to be a yaoi but i give them a shot anyway. Then after reading through your story i have the idea that the story might take another direction by Zatch be coming a..... a..... a..... GIRL! LOL That was a great cliff hanger by the way. Even though you know whats going to happen next. Well i guess your going to make this into a hentai , since its in that catagory. I just hope that you dont do anything too drastic. LOL JK. Use your better judgement. Good luck on the next chapter. Dont disapoint all us fans. -Your newest and most devoted fan AAML4EVER PS. Im whatever you write will surpass my greatest expectations of you.
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil cliffhanger. Plz post the next chapter soon.
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