| "The Butterfly Alchemist" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: thank god
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: December 14, 2005 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god you finally updated. very good. i wonder what's happening with ed. breeze and al are becoming friendly. keep writing.
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Title: Thanks For Updating!
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks For Updating.I Felt like i was waiting an eternity to see what happens!your a great writer.keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: golden_haired_neko_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Full... hahaha... metal... hahaha... NANNY!!!!!!!!! Hahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sooo.... hahahahaha.... funny.... hahahahaha..... Must.... hahaha.... write.... hahahahahaha.... more.... hahahahahaha.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Good Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_lites (too lazy to sign in) On: September 19, 2005 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel your pain. We just had testing... Still not done. It's dead annoying. But Breeze rocks. She's just one of those people that you love to hate and love at the same time. It's hard to put into words. -__-;;; I'm at a total loss at the moment but keep up the good work!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: September 18, 2005 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey nice things to know about bri, but where is the action? i like what she did to Roy. kind of brought him down a peg or two. what was she doing in her notebook? I MUST KNOW!!!!! that is all.
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Title: El Meep!
Reviewed By: Dark_lites [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bri rocks my trousers! don't pay much attention to that. Something random my friend and I made up in homeroom one day. But she's like a mini girl version of Roy, which I say is a very big deal. To be as cocky as Roy is an accomplishment that a limited few are able to handle. Good job!
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Title: Cool Story
Reviewed By: Katie_Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is really awesome .! I cant wait for more.! I Love Breezes attitude. Plz put up the next chappie soon! n_n
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Anime Lover475 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Great Please update Soon!
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: August 20, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job! love this breeze girl. can't wait for more.
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Title: Editor's note: version 2.0
Reviewed By: isha_hanyou_20 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few mistakes, but I'm sure you'll go back & fix 'em. Breeze kix a$$!!!!! Keeep on writin' sista! -Isha
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Fanactic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've updated! I'm so happy. Poor Ed. Always the short man out. Please update again soon.
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Title: Awesome, but short
Reviewed By: Fanactic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this so far, but rather short. I can't wait for for when Breeze meets the guys.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: August 12, 2005 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing. i must know what happens next. but i think i can guess who the butterfly alchemist is, but i don't think that i should spoil it for everyone.
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Title: la??
Reviewed By: ~*Angel*~ Lunar Alchemist On: August 12, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
make al real person...
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