| "Speaking Through Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting a while for the next chapter...brain storming on my own story and all...and something hit me...is it always wise to bring back one of them...Inu/Kag I mean...I think it wise not to...sometimes....unless its made up by one of those fairytale people...thats what I like about your story...you don't really make it either of the both above...you killed Inu and trying to bring him back or something like that, but you also had horrible things happen, like Kagome's family rejecting her, Kaede dying, and Kags always going crazy with these moments when she thinks something happened, but maybe they did happen...Inuyasha did say they were dead...but...I dunno...I was just rambling all of that before...cant wait for the next chapter!!
|
Reviewed By: ryuu_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
fix
|
Title: Hey ^_^
Reviewed By: Flips4Fun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahaha!! ^_^ Yes we two (you and I) are quite evil, BUT without conflict there can be no resolution. Update soon!! Andrea a.k.a twiddledee
|
Reviewed By: ryuu_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
fix
|
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this...but what I don't understand is how Kikyou was in modern era japan.....and I understand what you meant....Alot of the Inuyasha fanfics I have read lately have made me cry like Finally love by sexy_capricorn....and Desideratum by: Sueric....thanks...please update soon!!
|
Reviewed By: ryuu_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Reviews are broken for some reason
|
Title: haha hey me again
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah my review got cut off it was so long ^^ so this is what the rest said: I was just pointing a few things out; I wasn't trying to tell you how to write your story. But otherwise I love love love love the angst and how you described what Inuyasha must of went through. Anyways update soon!
|
Title: hey
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you reviewed my one story, True Love's Curse, and I wanted to thank you by reading yours ^^ Your review meant a lot to me because you gave me helpful criticism (by the way, I agree with what you said about detail. I kinda had a problem with that when I first started writing); I like reviews that give me tips more then reviews that are all like OMG YOUR ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER! (but sometimes those are nice too ^^)Anyways, I really am enjoying your story!! Do you mind if I point out a few things to you though? First off, I think Inuyasha's death should mean more to Miroku and Sango then a reminder that they aren't immortal. I mean, come on, they spent three years with him. He was their best friend. His death wouldn't just be a reminder. And the thing with Kagome's family, they would never ever act that way. But, maybe you have a reason to why they are acting that way so I won't go into that much. And lastly, the thing with the villagers. Even though in the show you don't see Kagome interact with them much, she is in their village a lot. I think that they would recognize her even as a half demon. I mean, she only has ears, claws, and fangs now. That's not that big of a difference. Also, they seemed fine with Inuyasha, so why would they freak out over Kagome, especially after they knew her as a human and knew how nice she was? And they would never ever turn on Kaede. Sorry for the super long review. And please don't take what I said personally. I was just pointing a few th |
Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read alot of fanfics since I've been on MMorg....and it's been a long time since I've cried like this....I love this story so much....it is so good...I really really hope you post more.....I loved it!!!
|
Title: WHA-?!
Reviewed By: Sothiaz On: August 02, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what?! why do we have to beg for more chapters? please keep posting!!! this is the first original p[lot i have seen in a long time, and i enjoyed what you posted... PLEASE keep this fic going!!!
|
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
