"A Silver Fox on the War Path" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 02, 2005 19:13 CDT Comment/Review: please update this story soon.
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Title: eyeopener/need more Reviewed By: Kerbear On: September 26, 2005 14:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow,what a twisted mind you have yet I loved every minute of it.Is it realy over?Are you really going to leave it like that,with Kurama dazed and confused and Hiei dead?The ward is still on Kurama and Hiei's to stronge to just lay down and die(or so I thought)I'm hoping for at least one more chapter for this.This was an eye opener from all the romance ones between the two and/yet still seems like theres more to to tell.
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: September 25, 2005 14:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, now that was the perfect revenge! That bastered got his upcomince and then some! But it is over right? Thats really starting to worry me. Please update if there's more to update.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 23, 2005 17:49 CDT Comment/Review: please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: animelovley On: September 06, 2005 10:07 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! Chapter 3 is up, great job as always!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: August 13, 2005 00:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my god, that was so AWSOME!!!! I must know what happens next. XD
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Title: ok, i'm curious Reviewed By: me On: August 12, 2005 11:29 CDT Comment/Review: i wanna know how much more twisted you can be :) what will happen with Kurama and the ward that is still on his neck? is he vulnerable b/c of it? how can he get it off? more please
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 11, 2005 21:08 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this chapter. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: August 06, 2005 02:03 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What an evil cliffy!! *Pounts* Please update soon, your doing so well!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 01, 2005 17:45 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: ww never want Hiei mad at me Reviewed By: Kerbear On: August 01, 2005 02:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Omg,what a deraged mind but I love and can't wait for the update.What did he get?What are they going to do?The 1st story kept me on the edge of my seat and this one is just as good.Never thought Hiei would lose it like that with Kurama(poor Kurama)Yet wow what a sex scene.I love them as a couple and want them happy yet Hiei needs a callar around his neck for a while after this.I hope you update sooon......Please
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: July 31, 2005 00:13 CDT Comment/Review: update! update! update
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 30, 2005 13:35 CDT Comment/Review: This is a great story. Why don't you have chapter 3 up yet? You know, it's mean to leave cliffhangers to your readers. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: RoseOfBlackFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 12:43 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey~~~! >.< Where's chapter 3!?
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 29, 2005 21:57 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this chapter. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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