| "Shinji Just Snaps and Totally Wales on Everything" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: so totally awsoeme
Reviewed By: h On: August 28, 2006 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the funniest most bananatastic hilarious fic i have ever read. it combines my two favorite things about nge fics, comedy, and shinji totaly snaping and beating the everlivng shit out of everything in fucktasticaly brutal ways, please, keep up the good work. you really mad my month!!!!1
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Title: Bwahahahahahaha
Reviewed By: Raikor And Taikor inc (not logged in) On: December 30, 2005 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
simply wow. this has got to be one of the funniest things i have ever read. excelent job. i loved the ending.
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Title: What the %@#$
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I've ever read something so pointless, that in my opinion, it begs for a sequal. This is by far one of the most mindboggling yet, hilirous stories I have ever come upon. I couldn't stop laughing. I also agree with Variablex 13, the decision made by Commander Ikari after the Basken Robbins was blown up was just too much. I loved the story.
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I just finished the last chapter. I think it ended very nicely. I like how in the begining, its all serious and then about half-way through it just goes crazy again. This is probabily still the best humor fic I've ever read, which honestly isn't saying alot. I do have some criticism though, I thought the action scenes where a little hard to follow, but that may just be me. I have problems with action scenes. I also thought Shinji and Asuka hooking up at the end was maybe going a little to far into the future. Other then that, good stuff! Now I have to read your other story.
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Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is shock-tactular. A humor story that manages to stay completely in character and be well-written too. You have no idea how apreciated this is. What a wonderful story you got here! I am you're slave until the next chapter is releashed!
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Reviewed By: Saldeas On: August 07, 2005 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMMFAO Funny as hell, interesting and it made me laugh. (that's rare enough as is) For once a fic that is geared towards insanity has been written like it was done by an adult with a proper grasp of grammar and you have no idea how mind boggling that in and of itself is lol
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Reviewed By: Variablex13 On: August 03, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An enjoyable read, the story format seems familiar in the way it's set up but this doesn't setract much from its enjoyability. Specifically having Gendo make a command decision based on an ice cream store. Fun, but using insignificant things to affect people can easily be overused. On another note, was Aoba's, "so many pentagons" comment a deliberate mistake or did you really mean to "hexagons," the six-sided polygons which always pop up on the screen to heighten tension.
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Reviewed By: Adam Kadmon On: July 30, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, kick ass. What a radical, though wholly enjoyable, departure from In The Dark Room. Damn. Normally I don't give parody and/or humor fics much time, but... Damn. That was good. Keep it up.
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