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| "Lady Fluffy" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: oops
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
in that first sentence I meant to put "I won't critisize too much since this IS your first fanfic.
| Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't critisize too much since this your fanfics. However, I would like to enlighten you on a few spelling errors you made. 'Tojikin' is spelled Tokijin. 'Tetsigua' is spelled Tetsusaiga. 'hatori' is spelled haori for Inuyasha's outfit. I'm glad you got Sango's name spelled right. I made that same spelling error when i first started out, so don't feel bad. You'll eventually get better with more experience. I like where this is going though. I hope you continue this nice original story. You're doing a nice in nice keeping characters in characters also, better than others I have read. I give you the best of luck and I hope you keep going. It will help if you check your grammer in your word processor of reread before publishing. No one's perfect on grammer, so don't feel bad about it.
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