| "Lady Fluffy" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is realy quite interesting. I must wonder where you got the idea for it,
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Reviewed By: Watford On: December 03, 2006 18:55 CST
Comment/Review:
For the love Of almighty God finesh this story .....please?
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Title: ch 14
Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: November 20, 2006 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
love the new chapter! kind of short though, please update soon!!!!!!
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Title: 13
Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
awsome new chaper ^.^ plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 18:13 CDT
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a bit of a rocky start at first (lots of mispellings, short chapters & such), but now that i have read all that you hav posted so far, i can confidently say that your writing had improved greatly. not to mention i really really like the plot ^.^ please update soon!!!!!
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Title: lol wat
Reviewed By: Lady Alice Armadias On: September 05, 2006 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SPELLING AND GRAMMAR IS TERRIBLE WHY DO I ONLY GET 4000 CHARACTERS CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL AMIRITE but yea it was original inasmuchas it was original. lolwat Definitely enjoyable despite the fact that you TOY WITH MY FANTASY OF BECOMING A GIRL Overall is a 9 BECAUSE YOU TOYED WITH MY FANTASY THAT IS A MINUS 1 Style is 7 because 7 can easily eat 9 with the help of 8. Therefore it is better.
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update. Your story is making me laugh so hard. Don't get me wrong, your story is AWSOME! please make another chapter! I gotta find out what Sess is gonna do to her. :disturbed things come to mind:
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Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ihope you update soon, because I love your fic
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Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story "Lady Fluffy". I think it's funny that Sesshomaru got turned into a girl and would enjoy finding out what happens so PLEASE update soon.
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Title: You finally updated!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 (not signed in) On: January 23, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you finally updated after so long!!! So Sesshoumaru finally says Kagome's name? How interesting...I love how you manage to keep 'him' (well her now) in character. Please continue. I still noticed a coupl of grammer mistakes but other than that, it was enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I LOVE YO{UR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!111111111 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 15:21 CST
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ok funny about time for some payback to fluffy.
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Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo you updated! Thanks for including me in your A/N! ^.^ Well I like it. You're improving in your grammer. I take it that you taken some of my advce. Please continue with this story!
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
in that first sentence I meant to put "I won't critisize too much since this IS your first fanfic.
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I won't critisize too much since this your fanfics. However, I would like to enlighten you on a few spelling errors you made. 'Tojikin' is spelled Tokijin. 'Tetsigua' is spelled Tetsusaiga. 'hatori' is spelled haori for Inuyasha's outfit. I'm glad you got Sango's name spelled right. I made that same spelling error when i first started out, so don't feel bad. You'll eventually get better with more experience. I like where this is going though. I hope you continue this nice original story. You're doing a nice in nice keeping characters in characters also, better than others I have read. I give you the best of luck and I hope you keep going. It will help if you check your grammer in your word processor of reread before publishing. No one's perfect on grammer, so don't feel bad about it.
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