| "Don't give up on guys" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: GFFGF
Reviewed By: HVYU On: January 07, 2006 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE!UPDATE UPDATE
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: marjorie On: January 07, 2006 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT,WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 17, 2005 15:12 CST
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Pooor Inu and Kags. I mean yes Inuyasha did cheat on Kikyo just then but you can help who you like. And Kag likes Inuyasha and even though Kikyo treats her non sisterly she still respect her by giving up the one she likes so her sister can be happy. @_@
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 (not signed in) On: December 15, 2005 17:48 CST
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o_O? I got a little confused with this chapter, all I really know is that Kagome thinks that Inuyasha was just going to kiss her because she's Kikyou's twin?
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 12:52 CST
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jus finish reading chapter 6, and i loved it. Hurry update, plz don't keep us waiting, me ofcourse, and the others would be pissed if you left us hanging like that
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it. PWEASE update UPDATE, UPDATE UPDATE UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! You seriously CANNOT leave me and others hanging like that. How will inuyasha make things better?!? How will kagome find it in her heart to forgive him, after what thet dum ass kouga did?!?! C'mon, update already!!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 22:46 CDT
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How could he leave Shippo at hte mall. And he acted like he did care. What is going through Inuyasha's head. How can you not miss Shippo, he's just so cute and bubbly.
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Title: Don't give up on guys
Reviewed By: selina sosa On: September 19, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ppppppplllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeee Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeee it's really good don't stop
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 16:06 CDT
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great chapter...a bit fast but still good...I can't believe taht Inu is with Kinky-ho...horrible...cant wait for the next chapter update soon...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 18:53 CDT
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forgot the heart...lol...
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 18:47 CDT
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lol...that was kinda short...but hey...every author of any kind of story has at least one off chapter...I'm still looking forward to it though...I luvs it...update soon...luvs Ty!!
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Title: Oh no
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh now you've gone and done it...not that i'm complaining but you've got me hooked on this story...I must have more soon...good thing you'll be back soon...I know how you must feel with writers block...I had it on my story...and I kinda made it sucky too....any way...please update soon...when you get back of course =D
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Reviewed By: Ecco [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 14:46 CDT
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Such a cute little story so far. It stinks that Koga is so mean, since he is one of my favoriate characters in the series. But hey, it\\\'s your story, you do whatever you see fit. :) I look forward to reading more! Great Job!
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Writer's block is a very common thing, but it shouldn't stop you from writing. I suppose posting once a month is ok, but if you like the story and there are others incouraging it to go on, then I suggest you try to write, even if you don't have any ideas, I'm sure you'll get some big plans you'll want to do, and then you can just add sub-in plots to lead your way there, that's the best strategy in writing. All in all, this fic is pretty good. The grammer and spelling could be checked over a couple times, but the storyline is clear and it seems to be off to a good start. The details are fairly specific, the characters don't see too OOC (out of character) except for Kagome's mouth, lol, but everyone has their moments. I rate this a 7 so far and I'd look forward to seeing an update, like I said, you'll lose more people's interest if you keep them waiting too long. Hopefully you'll get some ideas. And every update, I'll let you know what I thought and offer some helpful hints, update A.S.A.P, and you'll have the readers flooding in, in no time, ^-^
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 23:08 CDT
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Wow, someone else who stays up past 3 am. You aren't a bad writer. Sometimes people just are stupid, and don't review. I have that problem sometimes...grrr. Hey, read my stories! Anyways, this fic has a lot of potential. It was a good start, introducing everyone and their relationships. I llok forward to seeing how everything plays out. You don't have big spelling/grammar/spacing issues. Update soon.
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