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Reviewed By: SilverKit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, the ending if hillarious too. i hope you write teh prequal soon.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 17:28 CDT
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This story was great, if I were you I would rewrite it and make it longer.... This story can go many more places with some meat in the middle.
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Title: no!!!!!
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:35 CDT
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Why did you stop? There of all places!
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I appologize for posting that twice. It was an error on my computer. For some reason the spam filter would not take and I thought that my review had not been posted. Please ignore the other posting.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As for a prequel to this story I must say please write that one too. I really like your story it sounds interesting. I have a guess as to who Kagomes mate could be but I'll wait to see if it is whom I think it is. This story is a good one so far. Please continue to update your story as I await for that. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 18:38 CDT
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It's obvious who her mate is. Those stripes don't make sense because he usually doesn't have them on his face. I'm really interested in this though.
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Title: well
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 21:44 CDT
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Now I really think I'm right, update soon!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 02, 2005 20:41 CDT
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Pretty good chapter. I like the description of Kagome's mate at the end. I'll be the first to say my guesses. Kagome's mate is 1) full demon Inuyasha that somehow managed to keep the ears and his mind, 2) full demon reincarnation of Inuyasha that somehow managed to keep the ears, 3) Sess and Rin's hanyou son. Now that would be different. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: chloe On: August 02, 2005 17:00 CDT
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there are a lot of spellinh and gramar errors you should go back over it and fix them i can barley understand the story
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story!! I have a good idea of who her mate is. Keep updating please!!!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 02, 2005 10:05 CDT
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I, too, think I know who Kagome's mate is. But I will wait till you reveal the truth before I say anything. I like this story, and can't wait to see where you go with this. Only one thing. What happened 10 years ago? Did I miss it? Please update as soon as you can.
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Title: Me Thinks
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 22:47 CDT
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I think I know who her mate is but I would feel really stupid if I was wrong. The hint ' his long now black hair mingled with hers and his violet eyes.' in the first chapter makes me think i'm right though.
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora (not logged in) On: August 01, 2005 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update asap! I like your plot, but who is her mate? And who dragged her down the well? also IS KAgome going to fall in love with InuYasha all over again? Update please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but would love it if you made the chapters a bit longer.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
the plot is interesting. i'm very interested in why she has the pictures of the dog demons from the west on her wall...being that they would range from sesshoumaru and the Inu no Taisho to...inuyasha? very interesting. so Kag is married huh? the only inconcistancy i have caught is that you say fiv years have passed in the second chapter, unless i read it wrong...shouldn't it be more? if she is 28 and you're picking up normally when she was 15 in the series, then...it would be 13 years have passed. just watch your spelling, it's harder to read when you have a few mistakes but not impossible. it's a good story. i hope you continue with it.
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