Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
the plot is interesting. i'm very interested in why she has the pictures of the dog demons from the west on her wall...being that they would range from sesshoumaru and the Inu no Taisho to...inuyasha? very interesting. so Kag is married huh? the only inconcistancy i have caught is that you say fiv years have passed in the second chapter, unless i read it wrong...shouldn't it be more? if she is 28 and you're picking up normally when she was 15 in the series, then...it would be 13 years have passed. just watch your spelling, it's harder to read when you have a few mistakes but not impossible. it's a good story. i hope you continue with it.
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