| "Sakura Princess Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: September 14, 2004 21:17 CDT
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please make more soooon
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Reviewed By: white phatom On: September 03, 2004 01:11 CDT
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please make more
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Reviewed By: wing angel On: July 12, 2004 23:36 CDT
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please update
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 03, 2004 17:02 CDT
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I really don't mean to be a drag and all but I really reallyreally want to read the rest of the story so can you please please please put up chapter 10 or the more then just 1 chapter sorry for bothering you three times but I really really really want to read more of your story.
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:59 CDT
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Hey, this is Phsycobratt. Well, I haven't read the whole story yet, sbut I'm getting to it. Anyway, so far so good, but you still need to work on your grammar. It's not too bad, I've seen worse, but you could do better. As for originality, I guess it's pretty original. I haven't read any Princess Diaries crossover's before. Another thing, seeing as though I've never read the manga, only seen the anime on TV, it was easier to understand your story. And, I'm usually not into CCS - I'm a Naruto fan - but this is pretty cool, I like it. You managed to keep everyone in character, somewhat, Li does seem kinda OC. Also, I forgot to ask, you do know that kawaii means cute right? It kinda sounds wierd when you use it in this story. Any ways, I hope I didn't seem too harsh, just givin' you some constructive critizism 'is all. And, as for your grammar, try using Microsoft Word, it's pretty useful, you can always get a friend to edit and check for anything that doesn't make sense - unless your shy. I am, so if my writting is too bad I stick to Microsoft Word. Well, that's all, see ya.
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: 6t6788,445454,233434,asm and from the other Multiple reviews On: June 20, 2004 04:15 CDT
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please update
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 18, 2004 22:32 CDT
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still waiting
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: June 13, 2004 22:04 CDT
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great fic soo far i really like it plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz UPDATE SOON i really want to read it some more :)
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 11, 2004 16:40 CDT
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comeon it feels like its ben a year plz continu the story it june 11 its 5:37pm and i want 2 read chapter 10 so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon. plz plz plz plz plz p.s finish up the story soon plz
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 02, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey come on put the next chapter on please really love this story i love that u put princess diarie and ccs all in 1 story ur doing a really really great jpb please please please continue this fic cant wait on till the next chapter please get right on it great job.
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Title: I really enjoy this fic!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually read A Walk to remember and yes it's very very sad. Anyways, I hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kawaiigrl On: December 14, 2002 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really, really, really,(can't get enough 'really's in there ^^;) loved your fanfic. I like the way you took CCS and Princess Diaries and made them into a spiffy story! The reason I put a 7 on the Spelling & Grammmar was because there were a few words in there that wern't spelled correctly (I shouldn't be lectureing you about how to spell since I cant' spell to save my life...^^;) Anyhoo, I overly enjoyed your fanfic. ^.~
P.S. I cant wait for Chapter 10!!! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 05:20 CDT
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Wow, great fic! Please continue soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Princess Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 23:50 CST
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HEY HEY! Finally! This is fun to read. Like how you changed the balance from the actual Movie but it's great~ |
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