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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 18:16 CDT
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Well done on this chapter!!!! I loved the idea of Kagome living in a "males' domain". haha. But she's used to cleaning, now isn't she? Loved the bit of fluff going on. Keep up the great work!!!! Update as soon as you can, I'm totally anxious to read the next chapter! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 20:36 CDT
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I've always had a weakness for deep stories and your's is one of them. Keep updating and I hope you continue to write on this story till the end.
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 21:32 CDT
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Glad to hear you're not enduring the depression and cutting right now. I applaud your willingness to write it after going through that stage. I had to stop one of my fics that had this topic (different main theme though) because it just got to the point where it was reminding me too much of what I'd gone through. But anyway, I really do enjoy your writing. Keep it up!!!! I hope to see the next chapter up soon! ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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Reviewed By: Haru's Lover On: August 20, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!So sad.I can really relate though.I like that.I really LOVE.More pweaze!No demands though.=^_^=
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 22:46 CDT
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awwwwwwwwwwww poor kags!! i hope her step mom doesnt decide to come home early.....teh ebil...please update sooN!
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Reviewed By: star963852 On: August 14, 2005 23:43 CDT
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I love this story....u need to update soon
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Title: Deep Wounds
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:43 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: From The Author
Reviewed By: InuFan_Kenhandora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 14:23 CDT
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I just want to thank everyone who has reviewed so far, you guys are awesome. I appreciate the wonderful comments. And no worries myztik_shadow_inu, I'm not going through any of that, but I have experienced what its like to feel relief from cutting. I usually research what I'm writing about before I do it so that it's accurate. Again, everyone. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
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Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must tell you that I was almost a bit reluctant to read this, seeing as I myself went through that stage of depression and you described it all too well. But nevertheless, you're handling this slightly touchy topic very maturely, which is a fairly tough trait to find in fan fiction writers. I do hope you're not experiencing what Kagome is in this fic (namely the depression, but the abuse as well) You're writing is very mature as I stated before, and your wording, plot and character developments, and descriptions are absolutely marvelous. The way you're describing how Kagome feels and how Inuyasha feels compassion for her is excellent. Although I must ask you if Sango and Miroku are aware of Kagome's state of depression and abuse. The way you portray Kikyo and Naraku and their little group is wonderful (just the like the bitch and bastard they are). I've encountered many evil-stepmom characterizations but yours seems stunningly unique; same goes for the bratty Souta character. Keep it up!!!! For Originality, I really have to give you a 6 because the topic of abuse and depression, cutting and drugs, are so overused, but your creativity just bumps up that mark. I didn't give you an enjoyment factor, because as much as I like this fic so far, I don't really care much to re-endure that point in my life (you described it just so well!) but just know that I really enjoy this fic though. You are a mature author (as it seems), keep up the awesome work! ~Claire (^-^)
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 10:05 CDT
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So far so good, it's well written & i can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:03 CDT
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oooh! you have got to update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 06:48 CDT
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WOW!! please update asap!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: cheerios On: August 03, 2005 04:59 CDT
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awesome, i like the beginning so far : ) yay. i love your stories. look forward to your next update.
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