Title: Uugh... another one... Reviewed By: me On: August 05, 2005 03:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: Eeewww... the Mary-Sues are everywhere... Let me tell you this girl, readers HATE people who put themselfes or a Mary-Sue in their fic. And your NOT making any friends with the other obsessed fangirls, by acting like you and Bakura are lovers. Don't forget that Bakura is just a ANIME character. If I where you, I'd dump this fic, and make something else. Why don't you make a fic about your fave YGO male, and Fave YGO female, or a girl from another anime. You won't get many reviews with this, (maybe flames). This isn't a flame, consider this as a tip. I wish you good luck, cus you are going to need it. BU-BYE
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