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| "Happiness In Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: fallen star On: December 17, 2007 00:05 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the plot that you've created. secrecy on both sides that keep me wanting to come back, though that is not the only reason why i continue to read. hopefully you'll post more chapters because this is one great story that needs to go on until the very end.
| Title: The Most Original Kenshin-Kaoru FanFiction I Have Ever Read
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will start off by saying that you are a wonderful writer. It is always a pleasure to read the work of someone of your talent. Your age came as a pleasant surprise to me, adding to my respect for your writing. That said, my ratings of this story are reasonably high. It is obvious that writing flows naturally for you; the nature of the story as well as its structure and vivid imagery relay as much. There were a few grammar mistakes that I assume are no more than insignificant formatting issues that occurred somewhere in the process of transferring the story from one format or word processor to another. Such mistakes were few and far between, small enough not to draw the reader's attention away from what really matters: the story itself. I am most impressed by your originality via plot, setting, and characters. You somehow managed to take preestablished settings (such as the Kamiya Dojo) and familiar characters (Hiko, Kaoru, etc.) and created an entirely different story with a safety net of familiarity. Many have attempted to do so, but you have succeeded. This story is very romantic, yet very amusing. I look forward to your next update. I just hope I won't have to wait a month...
| Reviewed By: kana_chan On: August 05, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!it was good!i even had sound effects on the first chapter!lol any ways plz update soon!
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