| "With or Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: kougakola On: August 16, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I I love this keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: August 14, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story keep writing I want to know why Kagome and Inuyasha broke up.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:36 CDT
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Two weeks? whimper It's so not fair that Kagome doesn't know who Inuyasha is. Well, it's probalby better for Inuyasha that way, at least he isn't risking death or mutilation. Thanks for the index, I had no idea what any of those acronyms meant.
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Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: August 12, 2005 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
undenyibly awesome. u MUST wright MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey write more! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 17:02 CDT
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Aww.....kawaii. Let's see how Inuyasha and Kagome react to each other. I also forsee a large breakdown when Kagome finds out he is Inuyasha from her past. She seems to still love him though, which is a start. He'll have it easier because of that, than if she hated him. I imagine if he gets close to Yumiko then he'll be alright as well.
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 00:09 CDT
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Very cute. BTW- if someone's body temperature hits 107, they die. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: chesterzerousygirl On: August 06, 2005 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, if you dont finish this story im gonna pretend to cry because your suspence is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:27 CDT
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Funny how things come back to bite you in the butt. I can't wait for the imminent confrontation. Old fashioned candy bribery? Nice. Question-if Inuyasha is a halfdemon, in theory couldn't he smell Yumiko, and tell she was his daughter, or at least tell that Kagome's scent was all over her? Or did he only get the sense of smell when he changed his appearance?
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i really liked the first the chapter you wrote i think you should keep righting! looking fowarded to the new chapters! keep up the really good writing!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-angel18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:00 CDT
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I enjoyed your story, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: kougakola On: August 05, 2005 20:44 CDT
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lots of drama keep writing.
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Reviewed By: kougakola On: August 05, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lots of drama keep writing.
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