| "Breath" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: sandalswithsox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow for a first lemon that was really really good. And props for believable RukiaxIchigo romance! And the ending was SUPER cute
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Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 14:59 CDT
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hey i liked this 1 alot it wuz veri enjoyable and i hope 2 read more from in the furute
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Reviewed By: deike_89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You honestly have a gift for channeling the feelings of these characters. The pretext of Rukia having no experience with human emotions and feelings is portrayed perfectly. Their relationship wouldn't necessarily progress to this stage, considering the situation with Orihime. But, overall, bravo, great story, the touchier sections were handled very tastefully, completely within the character of the story. Great job.
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! Sometimes you don't need a back story to tell it. This piece is particually interesting to me becasue I feel Rukia does not know all the human feelings invloved in this world and I can see Ichigo showing her. I have read so many stories where she is so experieced, and I don't think that would be true. She didn't even know how to open a jucie box, for pete sakes!!!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful just a beautiful story very nice job
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:43 CDT
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that was absolutely beautiful. i enjoyed it very much!
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Title: really nice!
Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!
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Title: mynameisevile
Reviewed By: mynameisevile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 21:38 CST
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wow, you described them so perfectly... thumbs up ;)
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Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God for you, I was tolling around in the fanfics, wondering why there were so many boy/boy gir/girl ones, Rukia and Ichigo are my two favorites and I applaud. You're style was great, thanks again for not using poor grammar etc... I hate that. Anyway, good job and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, you did a good job writing this fanfic ^^
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Title: Its Great
Reviewed By: Saia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its rlly good and I loved it... Ive read lots of fics and this is one of the best... anyways i loved it Laters
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: kittykaggy20 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this was like the best lemon story ever! It's really hard to find ones with Ichigo+Rukia, so I hope you write more with this pairing!! Cause...I LOVE TGIS STORY!!!
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Title: well...
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well for your first lemon this was absolutely amazing... I just loved this fanfic... it was so awsome and the ending was so sweet. you're an awsome writer and I just had to let you know ^^
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: haiku_amarante [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely amazing. You're a fantastic writer; there's some real talent there, especially for your first lemon. The emotion in the beginning was really beautiful; I actually read through just the beginning, when he first woke up, a few times. You had a couple grammar mistakes, but that really didn't take away from the story at all. Great job!
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that that was a very enjoyable story. It was very good and I hope that you keep writing.
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