Title: Keep on Going!
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 23:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Now here is an interesting one. Seung Mina, Xianghua, and Talim?!? Being a closet yuri fan, I opened this story, not quite sure of what its quality would turn out to be. Upon reading completing the second chapter, I realized something - "There's no more chapters to read?!? Heresy!!!" How could something like this simply not have another chapter to read? In other words, the story thus far has been awesome. Your style is great, you've blended together the lemon scenes, and the emotional/physical aspects of this story together into an awesome package. You spelling and grammar have been optimal, but there are a few mistakes here and there - nothing major however, and certainly nothing that would detract from the overall quality of the story. The plot of the story itself...? New. Crazy. Most of all, original and fun! I would have never come up with anyhting like this, and you've done it in spades. I was a little dubious as to how this would turn out, but so far, it's been awesome. If this trend continues, we can all expect to see an awesome chapter on Talim (my personal favorite/best character on SCII incidentally). I've enjoyed this immensely - good SC fics are few and far between. Your is one of those good ones. Keep it up man, I'd love to see the next chapter! d('')b
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