Title: Love (Sort of): Vegeta and Bulma Unite
Reviewed By: Vrye On: August 14, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job; you're doing great! I do dislike when Bulma is written like a moron, which is not the case here. As for Vegeta, he is portrayed very much like the Vegeta on the series. So, overall I give this fic a rating of 8. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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