| "The Accident" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: InuKaglover69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2024 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the concept, loved that Inuyasha was able to make his
decision between the two women without much thought, loved the
connection between Inu/Kag, loved the intimacy and how everything
just flowers wonderfully. Such an amazing fic. ❤️
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Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 19:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. It was too bad that Kagome needed to be hurt for them to finally admit their feelings but at least everything worked out in the end. And I liked how you had Inuyasha be so caring and attentive to Kagome. "Stupid broken leg" was hilarious. And that was definitely a creative way to deal with the jewel. I've never seen it reabsorbed back into Kagome before. Great job.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 16:11 PST
Comment/Review:
So glad you were able to present this great story again (wonderfully rewritten & reedited). A joy to read!
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2010 17:33 PST
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I can tell you put a lot of effort into the editing job. Is it my imagination, or did you make the story a lot longer too? I especially liked how you went into greater detail about Inuyasha's dream about the night of the spider youkaik, and what happened afterwards. And that was a clever solution of what to do with the Shikon jewel. It lay dormant for years inside her body before, so there's no reason it couldn't exist peacefully inside her once more.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I like a LOT you're fic!!! it was sooooo sweet!!! I like the way kikyo died xD and I think the whole fic was really cute and sweet and lovely xD I really like it, Inuyasha was really sweet xD I liked everything, and the way they finally got to be able together, all for a drunken driver xD Well I love you're fic's and if you still have some old fics i'll read them xD Thnaks for sharing this one with us xD Good luck Bybye Eiko007
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 16:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 17:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this story was so cute=) read i tin one sittingXP lol one of my favsXP wish there was mor ethough... sequel? lol
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 17:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
this was a great story
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 20:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWEsome story!! Didnt drag out too long. But wasn't rushed either. Wish you would've gone into the 'mysterious pink light' but it turned out alright. Yay! =)
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw luv it! yah doggy ears! lol! gr8 story! ^^
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:10 PST
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Chapter 10: Hehehehe... having a broken leg must hurt more than whatever it was they did to me... I was only on painkillers for, like, a week. The hospital had brilliant ice cream! And I collected a total of 56 balloons. Yay!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:07 PST
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Chapter Nine: Wow, she's lucky. Pain killers always make me feel so groggy. Like I'm in the middle of dreaming and waking. Bad feeling. Because I can't think at all. Once, I had surgery, and I was totally out of it for a day because of all those stupid pain killers they gave me... might as well knock me out and be done with it.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:04 PST
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Chapter Three: Kikyou's being rather sweet. I like it - it's about time she faced what's been in front of her nose (and everyone else's) for so long.
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Reviewed By: Bloodbrother [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
that was nice i realy liked it mabe a sequel for having a pup thated be nice
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 19:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Was Great I Loved It !! Please Write More Srories. U R 1 Of My Fav.Authors!! I Love Ur Stories.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 20:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
I liked that stroy it was so cute
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 15:34 PST
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i liked this fic. good job.
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Reviewed By: WolfMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Liked this story. It was very sweet and cute! ;) But it is spelled Hanyou, not Hanyo! :)
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Title: YAY! Real review!
Reviewed By: blueangel326 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 01:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohhhh...I finally get to give you a real review! YAY!! Pardon the craziness; I just had a can of Mello Yello...Anywho...Really nice story, as I've said before. I really hope you keep going at what you've been doing. Your writing style and details were absolutely fabu-wonder-lifical!...if that word exists at all...Hehe...Anyway, fantastic job!
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Title: Good!
Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 17:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was really good! I can't manage to write a decent lemon, but you did great. I've read some... coarse ones, but yours was well written. Now, time for critique. in the last 2 chapters, you had an attraction to run-ons and babbling.
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Title: love it!!
Reviewed By: blackice3036 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 12:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
it was awesome!
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