| "My Naruto Work of Fanfiction" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: fantastical yet again
Reviewed By: Biancer On: March 17, 2006 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness gracious me! Wow... Sota + Sasuke + Arguing = ....*cough* lol!!! nice chapter, Keep writing!!! Mr. Snake-man has interesting ways of...well, TREATING his guests... *cough* Thine new name shalt be dolly! *dubs thy* XD, Narashi rules!!!! hahah lol... she deserves a high five and a round of applause... *starts clapping* oh, heck yes... X_X that was too funny.... Neji got so mad... ^^ oh my, Aoi is quite afraid of the dark, the storm moved in very.... fast.... wonder what's going to happen? The place get flooded? ooooh, but what if orochimaru was EXPECTING them to EXPECT that HE'D expect them to do something original, so in all truth he was EXPECTING them to climb up and go through a window! XP Wow... I just wanted to type that to see how it'd look.... Oh my, aren't double guessings bad?! ^^ Cho, nice chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZINGS!!! PLEASE PLEASE, TO MUCH ANTICIPATION!! and jusdt who is this uchiha?? GOTTA KNO!! ITACHI CAME IN!!! LOL, SO HOT!!! please update soon!!! (like always)
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Title: hm.. ooh...
Reviewed By: Guess who On: March 06, 2006 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmmmm, I liked this alot... Not much left to say but... 'whoooooooooooooooooooooa' .... AWEEEEEEEEEEEEESOME another Uchiha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! *squeals* I can't wait till your next chapterR!!!!!! Oh wow... itachi, evil evil eviiiiiiiiiiil. Is he looking for The new character...? ooooh, fun fun fun... What's happenning with AOIIIIIIIIIIII?!?!?! T___________T awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!! Poor Kaka and Aoi!!!!!!!! gosh! How can they get out!??! And wow. I HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE OROCHIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAARU!!!!!!!!! no offense. But my hatred runs deep for this snake guy.
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW WOW!!! LOL!!! THAT WAS AO GOODS!!! I LUVED ALL THER FLUFFY SCENES!!! LOL!!! EVERYONE IS HOOKING UP!! ITS BY TIME SASUKE GOT A GIRL TO SEE HIM STRAIGHT!!LOL, I WANTS MORE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON SO I CAN C SOME MORE FLUFFIES!!!
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....of course... you did the pain JUST to spite me didn't you... of course you did... ahh!!! what's happening to Aoi!?!?!?! I Hope it's not what I THINK it is!!! Oh great goddess of cliff-hangers, I pray thee, STOP BEING SO MEAN TO YOR READERS!!!!!!! *bows low* Update soon!!!!!!!!! n___n I liked that scene with Sota and Sasuke!!!! n______________________n It was awesome!!!! wahahahah! I wanna read mooooooore.... *presses face against screen and slides down* *laughing insanely* meanie meanie meannnnnnnnnnnnie.... *giggle*
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Title: AWWWWWWWWWWWESOME!!!!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHATWHATWHATWHAT?!?!?!?! *presses face to screen* WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPENEd?!?!?!!? OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!! YOU ARE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEAN!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAH UPDATE SOON!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!...AHHHHHHHHHHHH...Ah....ah... *passes out*
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SO...AMAZING!!!!! BEST CHAPTER YET!!! IM DYING HERE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! UR AWESOME!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
once again dude u hav shown wat an awesome writer u r!!! write more cuz i cant wait!!!! u rock!!!
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Title: W00000000t!!!
Reviewed By: pumpkinqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, Fantastic Job! n____n I can't wait until the next chapter. LOl The fighting scenes were awesome! And dude! LOLOL! Aoi falling through the ceiling and knocking the ANBU out! HAHAH, Priceless! *shakes head and laughs* I enjoyed reading this alot! lol! I can't wait for the next chapter! *Gai smile*
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Reviewed By: Ai Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 10:00 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a ReAlLy good story!!! please update soon!!! and u i liked the characters!!!
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Reviewed By: Muffin_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay and update! I can not wait to see what happens next. Pleaseee update soon, love! *give puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Muffin_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 01:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Woohooo!!! I love it! Seriously, I do. Please please please update soon. This story is just so lovely I can not wait to read more!
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Title: Thanks for the Review
Reviewed By: Oneesan no Miroku Houshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 22:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello, thanks for the review on Lessons in Shinobi Love. Being a KakaXSaku fan I've noticed that most fanfics involving them are either AU or in the future. I wanted to portray them in a believable way and still make it tasteful. I'll be updating weekly, so be sure to check back up on it. You have a pretty good fanfic. Do continue.
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Title: -__-;;
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like Kabuto, so I didn't read this... I noticed that no one really read this though, so I decided to "review". (Jeez, some review...) As I was scrolling, I saw that you had character stats and stuff... Ahhh, that is really mean to readers in general! I suggest you just describe them at the begining or make a picture we can look at and be done with.
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Title: wahahha
Reviewed By: Bi-Bi-chan! On: August 16, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this very much, I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!!! *giving you chibi eyes* I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! lol, yeah... I really looooved this ficcy!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!!!!!!!
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