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| "Koenma's Angels" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*losing mind* Come on, you're killing me here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I know I've been bugging you A LOT, but YOU MUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: It's me, YYHGirl!!!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE BEFORE I DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *has a cold in real life* ACHOO!!!!! *sneezes nasty mucus EVERYWHERE* UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
| Title: please update!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
| Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama looked me but I didn't notice, cool, I don't notice anything!!! ^^ Just kiddin'! UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EAGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, I'm like sooooooooooo eager for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ I loved it!!! UPDATE... NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Thank you and UPDATE, PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very much for putting me in your story, I'm very greatful!!! *bows* Please, update as soon as you possibly can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Angel?
Reviewed By: inuyasha_roxz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Katana; Age:16; Gender: girl; Race: wolf hanyou; Personality: Hot-headed, persistant, party girl, kind, doesn't show emotions much, hyper, and sometimes dangerous, maily to enemies.; Hair color/style: Black w/ white and red highlights, goes to her knees but is usually up in ponytail that reaches mid back;eye color: black w/ many amber specks; height: 5'8"; Wieght: 95 or so; clothing: black baggy jeans and black tanktop; Accessories; chains, black bandana, studded bracelets; Weapon(s): katana w/ dragin engraved in it; Powers: Fire and Darkness; Hates: Stupidity, Britny Spears, football, and jocks; Loves:to sing and dance(is really good) love punk-rock and some pop music, sports except football, running, hanging out, beinging the boss; Paired with: Hiei :-D -Hikari
| Title: Crap, continueing!!!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loves: Drawing, Hard, Dark Rock, Punk Rock, Reading, Writing, Training(Fighting), Video Games, Sleeping, Breathing, Swimming, Biking/ Skateboarding/ Blading ect..., Playing guitar(electric and non-electric) and piano/ keyboard, Singing(in her own privacy), and most of all, Being with her friends!!! Going to be Paired With: Kurama Anything else: She has a cat demon that look like Kilala from Inuyasha. Her demon cat's name is Siga. Siga is "basically" the only family she has left; she never let's anything bad happen to Siga, she keeps Siga dear to her heart and will protect her no matte what. She also knew Kurama when he was Yoko, they were friends. IT SOUNDS REALLY, REALLY KEWL, PLEASE PUT ME IN YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Can I be in it too, please?!?!?!
Reviewed By: YYHGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Ash Mimamato Age: 14 Gender: Female Race: Half Silver, White Wolf-Demon, and Half Human Personality: Kind, gentle, and wise. VERY, VERY protective of her demon cat, Siga, and her red choker. When I'm in a battle I'm usually unmercieful and cold to my enemies, but I 'alway' fight honorabley. I'm also VERY, VERY determind has a lot of stamina, courage, and is very clever. Has a LARGE amout of pride, loyalty, and stobboeness!!! Hair Color/Hair Style: Black (It's short and looks like Kairi's from Kingdom Hearts) Eye Color: Sapphire Blue Skin Color: same as Kikyo's from Inuyasha, i guess Height: about 5'3 or 5'4 or so... Weight: 95 lbs Clothing: A blood-red colored long sleeve, hooded shirt with black jeans that are baggy-ish and are kinda torn up a little, with sneakers. Accessories: A red choker(her mother gave it to her). Special Appearance: When there's a full moon she becomes a full Wolf-Demon, then she has white wolf ears anf tail and her hair turns from black to silver. If the full moon is red her eyes turn from sappire blue to Blood-red. Unless there is a full moon, she "looks" like she's just a human(but is really half Wolf-Demon). Weapon: Katana(Sword) and a Bow and Arrows Powers: She is a psychic and she also uses spirtual powers, as well. Hates: Preps, Fags, Sluts/ Whores/ Brittney Spears, Pop Music, Rap Music, and Girly Girls Loves: Drawing, Hard, Dark Rock, Punk Rock, Reading, Writing, Training(Fighting), Video Games, Sleeping, Breathing, Swimming, Biking/ Skat | Title: An Angel
Reviewed By: KittyCatAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 10:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Avalon Age:14 Gender:Female Race:Neko/Fire demon Personality:fun, knows when to goof off or be serious,at times can be stupid and sometimes smart,can be funny,shy but when you get to know her shes really cool,loyal,pranker,and its a good thing not to get her mad.Hair Color/Style:Has pure white and silky that goes to her lower back.Usually wears it down but sometimes she wears it in a ponytail or bun.Eye Color:Crimson Skin Color:Pale Height:5\\\'1\\\" Weight:107lbs Clothing:A white tanktop with a black zipper sweater over it,blue jeans and black and white converses.Accessories:a silver ring on her right thumb,then a silver ring with a real diamond on her middle finger.Special Appearance:Black cat ears and a black tail.Weapon:Katana,fists,or claws Powers:elemental magic,telepathy,and can make barriers.Hates:prepy girls,when people think their something that their not,when people lie to her,water,when people pull her ears or tail,bugs,dogs,homework,and being annoyed. Loves:Music,fish,milk,icecream,fighting,singing,video games,sleeping,skateboarding,going to the arcade,chilling with friends,and boys^-^ Going to be paired with:Yusuke.Hope you pick your angels soon cuz I wanna read your story!See ya!
| Title: another angel!!!
Reviewed By: skyla1291 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
name:Skyla Yamorie (sky-la ya-more-e-ray) age:15-going on 16 :) gender:girl race:dark fire angel peronality:sorta dark, but once you have her trust, she\\\'s a good and loyal friend;has a good heart, and can think on her feet-sly and colm, but when shes mad, u batter run! hair/styal:long black hair(to her mid back) with the tips of it blood red, and normsly has it up in a bun with the red ends brushing her shoulders, and 2 strands frameing her face eye color: a firey red when in batal, but normaly a deep rusty color skin:creamy pale and smooth 5\\\'4\\\"(or shorter than hiei;maybe an inch or 2) weight:120 clothing:anything that has black,silver, or red in it, normaly pants, but skirts arnt that bad, as long as there black, or red accories:a silver ring w/saphire, ears pierces, and belly button is too specal appearance:red eyes in batal, and hair turns into a complet blood red color, not black left what so ever weapon:dagger/katana, and she can use almost anything as a weapon, if need be powers:anything fire like;can freez things in place hates:preps, color pink, kuabara loves:fighting, anything punk-like, fire, color black,sometimes danceing and sharp things i would like skyla to be paired with heie please! thanks for reading! later... :)
| Title: another angel for you
Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Amber \\\'Rain\\\' Hiromi: known as rain. age 16 in human years female race:half kitune shadow/half fire demon persona: mischeivous, short tempered, kind, but deadly when mad... hair: violet wavy hair goes down to knees, a white streak framing her face eye color: blue-gray eyes fair skinned ht: 5ft 8in wt: 105 lbs clothing: long flowing black skirt, lavender tanktop, blood red scarf tied around waist accessories: velvet ribbon tied around neck, and a flame tattoo on left arm features: violet fox ears weapons: katana, and quarter staff powers: fire abilities, and shadow magic Hates: pink, bullies, and cockiness Loves: black, reading, drawing, and pulling pranks paired with hiei there ya go!
| Reviewed By: FallenAngelFromHell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 05:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Crystal Aoki Age: 16 Gender: girl Race: neko yokai (cat demon) Personality:Hyper,fun loving,a little bitchy,party girl,kind,good heart,loves to help,can be scary when mad Hair Color/Hair Style:a read head (about a shade darker that kuwabaras hair) goes to her ass , straight with one blonde stripe. Eye Color: blue-green Skin Color: creamy Height: 5'7 Weight: uh.. dunno.. bout.. 50 kg Clothing: black tank top with black baggy pants , or white baby-t and tight low cut jeans Accessories: a silver chain that hides her cat ears ant tail Weapon:10 daggers and a katana Powers: can moove objects with thought Hates: Britney Spears, bimbos,swimming,football Loves: loves to dance$sing,rock-punk music (green day,simple plan,blink182 etc.),hip hop,rap,r&b,tennis,jogging Going to be Paired With:Kurama
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