| "Because you asked me to" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: please don't
Reviewed By: habby On: September 17, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please don't be like those other authors that make a grate start to their fic and then stops. That really pissed me off the last time that happened. I really did loved the fic too, not liked loved. I almost failed a test because I was daydreaming about it for like TEN minutes. But this fic, your fic, is like 100000...times better. I got yelled at by me teacher because I was day dreaming, again, in class and when she started talking to me about it, I must have done it to many time I guess and she must have gotten her mad. Now I want you to think about what I stared to do when she began to talk. I would tell you the rest but I kind of blocked it from my mind. But again I really love this fic. I also think because you, more so the fic that YOU wrote got me into trouble so now you owe me. =P ='(. Please update soon. NO NOW!!! please ^_^ PS: it really took me a long time to write this, as you can see I love to daydream and that's what I was doing half the time I wrote this.
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Title: bigxnut@yaoo.com
Reviewed By: gb On: September 10, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!!!!! i love this chapter!! =) have a great day!!! =)
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Title: Because You Asked Me To
Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Nice to see Sesshomaru "snugly". Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 02:06 CDT
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lovely. simply lovely. at least there where no tears from me this time, i love watching mr. ice melt though. it makes you truly bellive that he is not one of the bad guys anymore. thanks.
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Title: bigxnut@yaoo.com
Reviewed By: gb On: September 05, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter here too =)
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Reviewed By: heartgirl On: September 03, 2005 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and can't wait for the next chapter so please update. kmadarasz@yahoo.com
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Title: UPDATE NOTIFICATION
Reviewed By: jdiddie On: September 02, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am reveiwing sue to the fact that the story is major i would like it if you you please notify me when you updat at: josh.hargrave@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 01, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing!!! wow.. i don't like jaken!!! jerk but i love this story!!! =)
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Title: bigxnut@yaoo.com
Reviewed By: gb On: August 31, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i don't like jaken even more!!! =) big meany, but i like kenji and kari!!! they should be married mated.. i love the story. =) dont mind me
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: secretshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome story, which I am amazed to say, it rendered me speechless. It is a beautiful story, and I must congratulate you on it. This is a truly extrodinary story, and very original. I wonder what her name will be! i hope Jaken rots. lol.
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Reviewed By: gb On: August 29, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great!!! love it and am waiting to read more. thanks so much for sharing your gift !!!
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Reviewed By: soliary25 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 02:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was skeptical at first (as I am with all stories where Seshy's fluff is used as a tail- I can't remember the real name for it *sorry*) but you have managed to draw me into the story line! Update soon, please!
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Title: keep it up!!!
Reviewed By: habby On: August 27, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please, please keep up what you're going its great. don't worry about how long it is. just make sure that you keep it up, please. and don't forget your other storys to, though.
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Reviewed By: gb On: August 25, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing!!! but, what will her name be.. rin has a mom!!!??? love it!!! =)
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Reviewed By: gb On: August 21, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. i'm crying this story is so beautiful!!! i love it! bigxnut@yahoo.com update please.. i can't wait to read more!!! =) thank you!!!! =)
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