| "Because you asked me to" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: what the hell is taking so damn long?!!!
Reviewed By: habby On: November 02, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I want to tell you is to hurry the hell up and write! Lol I just can't take it any more. I don't get why good fics take so long to get updated. And great ones seem like they never do. Lol ^_^ please for my sake and yours hurry up. Oh and I love where this is going so far. PS: Good luck with all your other fics too.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this work of fiction please update it soon i rilly like it. =3
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 10, 2005 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it more and more !!! it was funny.. i love the new pup.. can they keep it?.. it's so cute!!! =) well i will wiat for more please!!!! =)
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? I love this chapter!! Sesshomaru having actual feelings and laughing, his statement at the end, the whole drama between Inu and Kag, it's all great! Are we going to find out about the baby, and what is the connection? And what about the blind woman? Is that her new permenant name? Keep up the awsome work, and I can't wait to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 09, 2005 22:47 CDT
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I really liked this chapter. it was cute. but where did the baby come from and what is gonna happen to him?
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Title: Feh
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Inuyasha1026 On: October 03, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i really liked it keep it up.....BRAVO!!!
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 01, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. sessho should learn to tell himself trust his youkai and his heart and tell her.. but he needs to take care of the ppl in his palace!!! loave this chapter!!! =) and yasha and sessho.. i hope they can be brothers again!!!=)
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Reviewed By: F*B*M On: October 01, 2005 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic it's really good. I enjoyed it alot pllz up date soon!! ^-^ ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 01, 2005 01:39 CDT
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ouch. you sure know how to send this poor people(or demons) for a loop don't you....who was that b@@@h that said those things to her. and lets hope that sesshoumaru finds her before she spreads any more poison. How is Inuyasha gonna coup with the idea that he was loved by his dearly hated brother, and how are you gonna fix this mess. I REALLY want to know. but somehow i know your answer....just keep reading. Keh!!.....anyways. i really liked this chapter. hope you update this one and the rest real soon....Luvs ya
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 23, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. no tissues!!!! but it was funny, i laughed! the interaction w/ the character is one of the things i love most. very cool!! =)
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 22, 2005 23:12 CDT
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Finally a name. even if it is a pet name. I'm so happy for her.....and thanks for letting me know that i didn't need to run for my box of tissue before i started to read. Keep it up.
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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: gb On: September 19, 2005 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know i always thought that he missed his family!! a very moving chapter.. you make me cry soo much!!! =).. but i love your writing... thanks so much for sharing you gift!! =)
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 17:58 CDT
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Okay dear the tears are back and you forgot the kleenex. i'm just wondering if after the two of them heal each other, if you will let the STILL nameless woman and Kagome deal with the poison between the brothers and bring them back to each other. it would honestly be a shame if that rift between them is not also healed. at least in this story. Please update soon. and don't forget about your other stories. and while we are at it. how about telling those of us who are interested what your books are about. I for one would really like to know. Next time at least post a Kleenex warning. luvs ya.
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Title: please don't
Reviewed By: habby On: September 17, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please don't be like those other authors that make a grate start to their fic and then stops. That really pissed me off the last time that happened. I really did loved the fic too, not liked loved. I almost failed a test because I was daydreaming about it for like TEN minutes. But this fic, your fic, is like 100000...times better. I got yelled at by me teacher because I was day dreaming, again, in class and when she started talking to me about it, I must have done it to many time I guess and she must have gotten her mad. Now I want you to think about what I stared to do when she began to talk. I would tell you the rest but I kind of blocked it from my mind. But again I really love this fic. I also think because you, more so the fic that YOU wrote got me into trouble so now you owe me. =P ='(. Please update soon. NO NOW!!! please ^_^ PS: it really took me a long time to write this, as you can see I love to daydream and that's what I was doing half the time I wrote this.
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Title: bigxnut@yaoo.com
Reviewed By: gb On: September 10, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!!!!! i love this chapter!! =) have a great day!!! =)
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