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Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2002 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that kid! He just couldn't leave well enough alone could he? But then again, I was curious at that age and ya can't fault him for wanting to know how Veggie was all those years ago. I think he's about to get a rude awakening. As for Vegeta, my heart goes out to him and of course to Bulma. So what's next, therapy for the whole family? I can't wait (I mean this!) for the next chapter. Pls update soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 14, 2002 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And reality bites!!! Poor Trunks. That must've been a hard pill to swallow. My heart goes out to him, but I'm sure you'll find a way to help him out. Great chapter. Update when you can. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*
Wow, I never thought of Vegeta as having a soul/feelings. Personally I think he was more afraid of everyone seeing Goku stomp him into the ground (Darn Kakarrot!). Oh yeah, and Keep it up! ^_^ It is pretty good and you have me hooked. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. A little angst for Veggie, ne? No wonder he was afraid, so it's a good thing the kids didn't see it. Anyway, till the next update. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 06, 2002 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. That was a stroke of genius. Imagine slobby Yajirobe selling the rights to Akira Toriyama. I can't wait to read what'll happen next. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 03:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up! This is pretty good. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 28, 2002 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'd say Goku and Vegeta took things rather well, but I can't wait till they see the episodes. Good chap. |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chappie and I can't wait to see Goku and Vegeta's reaction to all of this. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 21, 2002 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the ladies handled themselves with alot of poise. If it had been me...well let's just say I would've needed a tranquilizer. Good chap JB. Lookin' forward to the next one. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 18, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good chapter. Nice of you to mention little Vegeta. I had almost forgotten about that stupid bird (surprised he's still alive). My only complaint is that it was only one chapter (hint). Anyway, feel free to dish out some more when you get the chance. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 13, 2002 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really interesting. Please put up more chappies soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 09, 2002 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your intro, in fact I read it twice. Now that I've got it all memorized "let The Show begin". Peace |
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