| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 11:21 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading it.. and i just wanted to tell you that i thought that you did great portraying the characters.. inuyasha being shy and kagome only wanting what is best for him and having complete trust in him... i think that you did great!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this story.. i thought that it was heart warming... and ya just great job!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 01:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW HE ENDING WAS SWEET!!!!!!I LOVE THIS STORY! U R AN AWSOME WIRTER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 16:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1-5 was sooooooo good!!!! You are an awsome wirter!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovved this story it is one of the best I have ever read! and some points in the story were so shocking I never thought for them to happen! but I loved it and im glad I got to read it :) keep up all the great work ^_^
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:56 PDT
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i'm glad i found this story i loved it!!!
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Title: I have a bad habit of reviewing only at the end of a completed story...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 07:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can see why doggieearlover likes to have you as a beta, the ideas that spring forth from your mind are truly awe-inspiring. Having Inu/Kag come together after the accident was a new and original way to have them proclaim their love for each other. I liked it, the troubled speech only he new how to make out at first, Inu taking care of her and feeding her, that was awwww cute! I am not a Kikyo lover, truth is I hate her sometimes, she is soo ugh! But now I came across the Kikyo you envisioned and I see from a different angle now. She can also be nice and have a heart. The way you had us say goodbye to her was beautiful. All in all, I fave become a fan of your writing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us...Hugs, Pinkit!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: iranad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Okay, so I'm going to finish the rest of this, but I had to comment now. You have managed to do something I adore when i read fic... make me feel. I have cried so much already, and I'm sure I'll end up doing it again, or laughing out loud at something. You my dear, are a very talented writer, and I am so very grateful you shared this story with us. Thank you.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Ender_kb [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 01:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. You kept the characters pretty much the same which seems to be hard for people when making InuYasha admit his feelings. I love the parts with Seshoumaru. You did a fantastic job with him. The lemons were great as well. Loved it all! Great job.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 06:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: DamagedTears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whew i was so worried that i wouldn't be able to read your other works after reading this one when i couldn't find your stuff! I really loved this story and i look foreward to reading your other works!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 22:14 PDT
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wonderful story... loved it... good work... great job!
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story, and wanted to tell you that I absolutely loved it! I hated to see it end. You did an excellent job portraying the characters, and I loved how you had InuYasha interacting with Kagome's mother. It was very special :) I read the long author's note you posted near the end, and I have to say that you did nothing wrong with your story - I had no problems understanding what you were portraying by having InuYasha leaving Kagome behind to hunt for the last shard with Kikyou. You did just fine with your writing, so it was no fault of yours that someone misunderstood :) Anyway, let me say again that it was an excellent story and I thoroughly enjoyed the ride.
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Title: Finally Finished Reading This
Reviewed By: animegamergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 23:54 PST
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Hey!!! Once again you amazed me with the way you wrotethis story and I don't know how people can talk to you about your writing when I understood it all lolz!!!! I can't believe it took me a while to read this whole story since you are already done with it, but it was REALLY good and I'm sad that it had to end but I'm also happy^_^ Keep up the good work and I believe you have gained a new faithful fan!!!!!!!^_~ Newest fan: animegamergirl or Jackie^______^
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Title: From Beginning to End
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:20 PST
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That ending was so sweet and perfect for Inuyasha and Kagome, especially the last lines. I can't complain about the time Kagome missed with Inuyasha during her pregnancy with the twins since he finally got to experience it with their new youngest son. Honestly, your story was so captivating, original, and touching that I was enthralled with it until I got to the end. The plot was well planned and the conclusion was pleasing and more than satisfactory. You did a great job and I hope you write many more stories in the future since you have talent. You really did a great job with the characterization since all the characters felt like their true selves. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:45 PDT
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That was an awesome story! It had some nice lemons in it which I compliment you on! They were not over done but still made me a bit excited if I must admit it. They story itself was better than I expected and I really enjoyed reading it! You are a talented writer and I thank you for giving me something good to read.
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