Reviewed By: LURVELY! On: August 17, 2006 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I don't think you're sick, Vegeta was eating flesh even in the show, when he was with Nappa. He just pulled an arm off a dead guy and started munching down. I like this story a lot though. It seems really interesting, and I like how threatening you make Vegeta when he's still in a cage. You are such a great writer anyway, I've read quite a bit of your fiction and I love your style. This is great, please continue. I'm really sorry you're not getting the amount of reviews that you DESERVE but people are lazy, they read, they enjoy, they leave. I like to add in the "review" step between "enjoy" and "leave". I enjoy reviewing stories. So...Great Job, Thank You!
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