| "Sesshomaru & The Gates of Tolrona" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 22:31 CDT
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Since you asked so nicely i'll write you a review.... oh wait. does it have to be nice??? Kidding. you know that. anyway. sess, saved kags. gee you're almost as bad as me... but i liked it anyway. luvs ya....
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Reviewed By: sesshylover828 On: September 17, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet fic! Please update soon! Oh and I'm glad you realized you spelled Sango's name wrong. But hey everybody makes mistakes. YAY MORE ACTION!!!
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Reviewed By: ahmed wazeer On: September 05, 2005 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very fun and enjoyable it needs more excitement and i think i know what will happen so try 2 write something that the reader can't imagine 2 happen. but really it's a very good drama .wish u good luck.
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Title: Legend
Reviewed By: Legend On: September 03, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have never really watch Inuyasha before, and when I read this it seemed really interesting. So I think that I might start watching the series and stuff!! lol. And turtlequeen!! I had to give you a 5 on spelling and grammer, other than that it was awsome!! lol. You ahve got me addicted to the show Inuyasha. lol
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Reviewed By: jennyk On: August 25, 2005 14:40 CDT
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I thought this one was pretty good,had a fun reading it!update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Rest assured that I will update soon and there will be a lot more action in this story...I'm just really busy with school now... and the constant explanations are pretty much done and over with so don't worry about that no more. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 22:54 CDT
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ehh...the crap at the beginning is really annoying and I never read it. The constant explanations is even more annoying. DOn't you think that people who are obsessed with INuyasha enough to read/write fanfiction know the story line (your introduction) and who all the characters are??? At first I didn't mind because it sounded like the beginning of some episodes and movies...but then you kept explaning stuff into your first chapter and it got annoying. I'm not even through the story yet but I felt I had to say something now in case I don't finish it. I hope the plot and action make up for everything else.
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