| "Sesshomaru & The Gates of Tolrona" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story.pwease hurry and update A.S.A.P
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Fire On: December 17, 2005 02:21 CST
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that was such a great chatper i hope you update really soon Keep writing
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Reviewed By: sesshomaru and ishy On: December 10, 2005 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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why do u take so long to write it?
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Reviewed By: Amaya_sama5463 On: December 08, 2005 08:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good job on the chappie. I feel sorry for hojo though. but hey, he can date more peoples. i gotto ask thought, is it a sess/kag/inu?. ooooooooooh it would be awsome if kag and sess became like bro and sis. anyways. cant wait for your next one. I enjoy your writting
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Reviewed By: AngelnamedEcarg76 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 18:34 CST
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Very intriguing!! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: wazzup!
Reviewed By: Amaya_sama5463 On: November 14, 2005 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, this is so awsome. your a great writter. i cant wait to tell my other friends to read this. please take your time to write. we should bee greatful your even writting!
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Reviewed By: vbollman(nsi) On: November 14, 2005 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay. i have one phraze for you. it will do wench it will do. they're getting married hey, they're getting married hey. lol. ttyl
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Reviewed By: STEELFETHER11 On: November 14, 2005 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an exalent plot though you need to explane your self more you kinda jump from one thing to another PSmy spelling sucks so I cant critesize yours PPSplease continue!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 22:31 CDT
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Since you asked so nicely i'll write you a review.... oh wait. does it have to be nice??? Kidding. you know that. anyway. sess, saved kags. gee you're almost as bad as me... but i liked it anyway. luvs ya....
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Reviewed By: sesshylover828 On: September 17, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet fic! Please update soon! Oh and I'm glad you realized you spelled Sango's name wrong. But hey everybody makes mistakes. YAY MORE ACTION!!!
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Reviewed By: ahmed wazeer On: September 05, 2005 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very fun and enjoyable it needs more excitement and i think i know what will happen so try 2 write something that the reader can't imagine 2 happen. but really it's a very good drama .wish u good luck.
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Title: Legend
Reviewed By: Legend On: September 03, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have never really watch Inuyasha before, and when I read this it seemed really interesting. So I think that I might start watching the series and stuff!! lol. And turtlequeen!! I had to give you a 5 on spelling and grammer, other than that it was awsome!! lol. You ahve got me addicted to the show Inuyasha. lol
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Reviewed By: jennyk On: August 25, 2005 14:40 CDT
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I thought this one was pretty good,had a fun reading it!update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Rest assured that I will update soon and there will be a lot more action in this story...I'm just really busy with school now... and the constant explanations are pretty much done and over with so don't worry about that no more. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 22:54 CDT
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ehh...the crap at the beginning is really annoying and I never read it. The constant explanations is even more annoying. DOn't you think that people who are obsessed with INuyasha enough to read/write fanfiction know the story line (your introduction) and who all the characters are??? At first I didn't mind because it sounded like the beginning of some episodes and movies...but then you kept explaning stuff into your first chapter and it got annoying. I'm not even through the story yet but I felt I had to say something now in case I don't finish it. I hope the plot and action make up for everything else.
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