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Title: now that's just mean...
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 09:28 CDT
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...you put aya and yohji together with whip cream and jello...what are you trying to do to me???
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 22:48 CDT
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haha i see you fell into the same trap as me...the neverending story....keep writing i like reading...i'd like to see more unfolding of the plot...
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 22:15 CDT
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i like this story....i like the tie in with yami no matsuei, but that it doesn't over-ride the focus of the story...and that u give background on the red shaman team...
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 18:07 CDT
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Oh, more chapters! Cool! I want to say I'm enjoying this, it's very original and I want to see where you're going. But I'm still getting confused. I'm trying and failing to get all the characters straight in my head. I don't know what to tell you to fix that, though. Just wanted to point it out, constructive criticism is good, right?
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Title: Hmmm...
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 20:21 CDT
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I enjoyed reading this, but I'm lost. Who is Lady, and the others? You do have a nice writing style, smooth and easy to read. I say keep writing! (since you asked.)
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