| "The True Emotions of Sesshomaru" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad I would like to see some more so up date soon.by the way I thnk that you mean here as in this place not her as in the girl. just so you know the next time you wright. good story hope for more.
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Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o god please update. dont leave me here! ahhhh!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! that's so awesome! i like it! hehehe
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Reviewed By: Aishiteru148 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm used to short being 6 pages so i'm not going to say anything lol. I think it's not thought through enoughf. You could add more dialouge. intead of. "she heard some voices. it was inu and kikyou kissing agiain." it could be. "She slowed down when she heard familiar voices through the bushes. When stepping into the small clearing. There stood Inuyahasa and Kikyou. After all the love she gave him. She felt used and not carred for. She ran in the oposite with no real desination in mind." You don't have to change anything you wrote these are just my faults, which can be worth nothing. I really like what you have come up with though, sesshy/kag fics are my pass time sin. lol. ~Mina www.myspace.com/aishiterusessho
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Reviewed By: little-pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O ok.. 1 yr! *cries* what is wrong with thses ppl? plz update its a gd story!!!!!!! PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnk u! *smiles a BIG smile!*
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: debra_loves_sesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story please update soon!
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Title: The True Emotions Of Sesshomaru
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Wolffangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story but you need more chappis!! LONGER CHAPTERS!! (again very good;])
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i like it alot so i hope you update asap
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Title: LOVES IT
Reviewed By: DatGabby On: September 20, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a spontaneously good writer, i just loved the ending. Whenever you write your ending, hit me up on the dot ok. kittyluvah1@netscape.net ...........PLLLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZE!?!?!?!??! Thank You :)
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Reviewed By: klairna On: August 30, 2005 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i must say i'm enjoying this story but the enjoyment thing is that you make short chapters and long cliffhangers. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Leigh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:06 CDT
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this is a good fic but could you make the chapters long and more of them i really like the fic but it neeeds either longer chapters or more of them
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Title: inuyasha
Reviewed By: naomiko On: August 23, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 story, terrible length, update soon and make the scenes longer. more emotion more background. mroe thoughts ya know? make it longerrrrr
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Title: The True Emotions Of Sesshomaru
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: The True Emotions Of Sesshomaru
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters
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