| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Reviewed By: jin_the_wind_master_420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 00:15 EDT
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I forgot to mention it but both are by doggieearlover.
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Reviewed By: jin_the_wind_master_420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 00:13 EDT
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Keep up the good work on this fic, and please update again as soon as you can. As far as recomending stories, if you haven't allready read them, try Blood and Tears and the Live and Let Die series. Both have been nominated for the IY Fan guild.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 20:57 EDT
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I've always wondered whether celebrities read magazine articles about them. I can understand that they would, but it must be awkward when it's a fashion oops, or something along those lines. It is really hard to come by good stories now. You should try InuGrrrl, who has her own site. http://www.feudal-pulpfiction.net/ There is also a wonderful story called The King's Mistress on ff.net. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2067824/1/ Finally, Jewel of my Heart, on mm.org. http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/94103 All are excellent quality, tear jerkers, and my personal favorites.
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Reviewed By: Patchcat (NSI, lazy) On: July 11, 2006 20:41 EDT
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Hey, Demi. Another nice chapter. It will be interesting to see how not only Inuyasha reacts to all the people in his apartment but how they react to seeing him this morning. I hope Sango doesn't hurt him too badly. I would like to offer a few suggestions. It's why I came out of my hole ^_~. "Higurashi and I wish to keep our relationship private..." I think the first one was a typo here, but watch out for those homonyms. Also watch how you punctuate your speaker tags: "Yes. A few weeks ago actually," he said truthfully. I also noticed a few places where you had an introductory clause and you didn't use a comma after it. Keep an eye out for those, too. Overall the story's a good read. There are just a few technical errors. I see a lot of potential in your writing and would be willing to look over it for you in that respect if you're interested. Just let me know. I can be found here and at that board we both frequent if you are. Either way, I will wait (im)patiently for your next update. In the meantime, snuggle up to that man for a while, and then go read "Thousandfurs" by RosieB over on FFN. I believe it will fit all of your criteria nicely. ~Patch
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:02 EDT
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Great Chapter! I hope to be able to read more soon though I understand the obligations that come with "life". Anywho as for the endnote I am going to suggest "To Wash it All Away" by Crystal Echoes on fanfiction.net. It is a Sess/Kag pairing which was new to me when I read it but PLEASE don't let that keep you from reading it. It isn't "hard" on Inuyasha (in that it isn't written by a hater but his character does suffer due to a misguided action) but the characterization of Kagome and Sesshoumaru is flawless. I stayed up throughout the night (I think it tooke me 27 hours) to read what is out thus far. My only complaint is that she is really slow to update and I REALLY need the next chapter! Another similar story (in that it is a Sess/Kag pairing) is "Tales from the House of the Moon" by Resmiranda (on this site). I found this after "To Wash" because of my kindled interest in the idea of the non-canon relationship. This one is completed and I can't say I am terribly fond of the ending but I will say that it stays true to form. If you have a visceral aversion to Sess/Kag pairings then feel free to mention it (or email me via my info) and I will scour my less recent reading choices. It just happens to be what I have been reading as of late. I don't mind either Inu or Sess with Kag as long as it is done logically and such.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 16:27 EDT
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Hey there. Loved the update, and I can't wait for Inuyasha to actually see Kags when he gets home. As for a good story to read, I think "When He was mine" by Mariangela is really good. And if you can't find it for some reason, here's the link: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/56400
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Reviewed By: Enigma In Your Mind On: July 11, 2006 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter as always, Very well done. As for AFF.net, it is up and running again (Finally) Keep up the good work. enigma_in_your_mind@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg omg i really really really REALLY loves it!!!!!!!!!!!! its just....UNDESCRIBABLE!!!!!!! so just hurry the hell up and update kk???? oh and by the way i loooooooove the dresses...Cheers
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 03:02 EDT
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LOVE IT!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: close quarters
Reviewed By: hellsangel5891 On: June 22, 2006 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow me love this story can u please update soon please ^^
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far my favorite story ever. I can read this story over and over again and not get tired of it.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: =) On: June 05, 2006 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. It's nice to read and the characters aren't tiring. I like stories where Inuyasha and Kagome are roommates. Great job writing the story. It deserved the nomination. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 01:21 EDT
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I'm in love with your fic. It's been a long time since I've been on, but when I saw your fic I instantly remembered it and caught up on the chapters I had gotten behind on. I'm glad you've kept with it. I don't know if I've mentioned it to you before or not, but you should read Dragon's lover"s Transformations and changing lives. I need to finish reading it myself, but I think you would love them. Again, I love your work and please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 01:06 EDT
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Hahaha! I agree with the 16-yr.-old comment. They should be more like me and at LEAST wait 'till they're 18.... 0.0 ... Oops...Haha...yeah...
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Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:53 EDT
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This chapter is great so let me in on what you're going to do next chapter oh if you don't have my e-mail adress here it is j_youkai@yahoo.com Keep workin' on your fanfic.
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